| Title: Midnight Tragedy
| 29 Sep 2014 4:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Exciting chapter, and no tears at all, despite the warning.
Some confusion though....Earlier in the story, Snape told Harry not to write to Ron about staying at Snape's house. Harry agreed, then wrote to Hermione about it. I thought it was dangerous, but now she acts like she had no idea where he's been. For awhile, I'd thought it was good she knew he was there, so she wouldn't get upset if she read a news article about the Dursley deaths. Oh well.
OMG!! You made me cry!
Poor Severus1 You HAVE to make him change back.
And Hermione should stay with him and Harry. I feel bad for her.
| Title: Midnight Tragedy
| 19 Mar 2010 8:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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So very sad! But that is what happens during a war. I hope that they can help Severus they really need him. What was that spell--a Memory charm?
Oh no!! This was such a sad chapter! I hope those awful DE get killed or dragged off to Azkaban. Poor Hermione! And poor Severus too! How will they ever get him back to himself?
I read Wizard's Luck it was awesome! Kudos!
Blue light? Blue like is obliviate? T__T noo Severus! erg Moon Fire arg who ever, but first off he needs to get treatment, I wonder if stunning spells work on him...
I read Wizard's Luck 1st Ch. I was wondering if Harry was stealing his loved one's luck when he got good luck, cause Draco failed and Sev got very sick.
| Title: Midnight Tragedy
| 18 Mar 2010 10:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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Normally, I would cry for a chapter as bittersweet and sorrowful as this but, at the moment, I'm currently in the middle of my Politics class ignoring my Professor and reviewing your story instead.
I half expected you to write more detail than there currently is. I thought you would prolong the process of Hermione's torture so that a reader would have a chance to truly understand how she felt. Please don't be angry with me, this is /my/ opinion only. Although, I understand why you may not have done so; you needed to involve Moon Fire and give him a chance to lose his memory. Might I add that I'm curious about that Auror with the goatee; is he Selene's husband? Or just a plain Auror that knows more than he should?
Might I add that stallions are troublesome at the best of times - even a well-mannered one. They think about one thing and one thing only; it will be difficult because Moon Fire is wild and he'll, obviously, want to add to his harem.
I won't say everything I want to, in case other reviewers read your reviews. However, I will say this. Harry and Hermione had better be careful; it doesn't matter that beneath the stallion is Severus Snape. They need to focus on the fact that Moon Fire is a dangerous and unpredictable animal with the instinct to defend himself. But, with love and patience, Moon Fire will fade and Severus Snape will return.
May Selene guide those two rambunctious youngsters.
Always yours,
Jewels.
In a tearing hurry, so short review. I can't tel you how much I'm loving this story. Thanks for the warning, I needed the kleenex.
Donna
OH my god poor Sev! Oh his leg and his head I will check out your new story.
I'm extremely shocked. The chapter is well written, which I'd be surprised if it wasn't, knowing you. I was right, though, Snape found Hermione home safe, I did not foresee him losing himself though. I was also shocked that Hermione already spoke to Selene. I guess I thought she'd be a bit more vague for a bit longer. I agree with some of your other reviewers in that Hermione may become an initiate as well, but I thought she'd have to start from scratch as well. Do they call Mrs. Tonks first, or do they attempt to heal him, or at least make him human again, before summoning help? I hope the fairy (Selene?) girl comes to help.
I think that the Grangers would be content with knowing that their daughter is alive. I hope that Harry and Hermione will be able to help Severus find himself again. I wonder what the spell that hit him was?
Great chapter!
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