| Title: Midnight Struggle
| 29 Sep 2014 4:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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So what happened to Harry's knowledge of the speaking with horses spell?
I love this whole story but especially the parts where Harry tries to make friends with a reluctant Moon Fire. So cool! Sorry you're sick :(
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I love those parts too!
| Title: Midnight Struggle
| 24 Mar 2010 1:40 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Poor Moon Fire! I really hope Andromeda can help him and Harry needs to watch himself--getting kicked by a horse really hurts. i know because I've been kicked by one. Beautifully done!
Author's Response: Me too. It's not fun. Andromeda will certainly do her best.
I loved it. It was really interesting to see how Moon Fire and Jasmine reacted to each other. And I liked how Harry and Mione comforted each other. I hope Harry can help Moon Fire soon!
| Title: Midnight Struggle
| 24 Mar 2010 1:31 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating when you are not well. A nice mix to the story but I miss Severus!
| Title: Midnight Struggle
| 20 Mar 2010 8:44 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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The tenderness harry was showing moon fire was so well written you could picture it. Can't wait for tonks to help! Please post soon, great chapter.
I hope that Andromeda will be able to help them figure out how to help Severus. I'm sure that with time and TLC, Harry will win Moon Fire over enough to gain his trust. I'm just glad that Moon Fire didn't hurt Harry when he panicked; Severus would never have forgiven himself if he had.
Great chapter!
| Title: Midnight Struggle
| 20 Mar 2010 6:09 am
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| Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous)
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I'm sorry, Kathy, but it's just too much for me right now.
I'm having a really bad day.
Awesome chapter! I really like the dynamics between Harry and Hermione as well as Jasmine and Moon Fire and Harry and Moon Fire. I am looking forward to seeing what Andromeda Tonks brings into the mix.
Cool chapter!!!! I adore your characterization of Harry. Moon Fire is great too. Really good job with everyone's voices and thoughts. You have great energy and descriptions in this chapter, the whole story. Great job with adding this new problem in. It is very interesting to hear Moon Fire's thoughts as a wild stallion. I hope that Harry stays safe, and that Moon Fire will start to trust him, to heal him.
Great chapter! thanks so much for the update! I loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I always wanted to do a POV story with a horse and Moon Fire provided me with the chance to do that. Eventually Moon Fire will start to trust Harry some more, but right now he's scared. And a scared animal doesn't trust easily.
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