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Reviews For Moon Fire
I look forward to more. Author's Response: Yes, Hermione will learn that is the truth since sometimes focusing on another's pain helps you deal with your own and understand it better. Glad you like my Draco, he's a but different from how he's usually presented. And that last is definitely true. No one is of a piece. Thanks for reading!
I hope that Harry and Hermione will figure out how to help Severus soon. I wonder why they haven't thought to ask Selene for help yet? If Severus is one of her favorites, wouldn't she be willing to help? At least Moon Fire has decided to be a little more trusting of Harry and Hermione. Perhaps, in time, his tolerance of their presence will jog his memories. One can hope at least. Great chapter! Author's Response: The neutral ground could be Moon Fire of course. If they manage to set aside their rivalry they could become friends. She would, but perhaps she has another plan in mind for the two of them. Sometimes the goddess can be very inscrutable as you'll see. Yes, trust and love could help him recover not only physically but mentally as well. One never knows.
"Neither would have suspected Malfoy to eb anything..." "Jasmine isn't in season and so she';; reject him..." I didn't expect Draco at all! But I like his story. I love his relationship with his aunt! Awesome. I was wondering how they knew of Hermione's loss, however. I don't know if that would be in the Wizarding news that morning, though I suppose it could of. I loved Hermione's thoughts at the end of the chapter, like they were playing house. It is a very interesting situation. I loved the descriptions of healing, and how the water felt good on Moon Fire's leg. Fabulous to read about. You are doing a great job on this story. I am really happy that you are posting it and updating it. Thank you! Author's Response: Thanks for telling me. I've fixed them. Draco will play a supporting role in this to both Hermione and Harry. He regards Andromeda like a second mom. True, it might not have made the papers just yet, but Andromeda is Selene's disciple and the goddess would have made sure she knew about Hermione, who is yet another of her Chosen. Yes, and who knows how long it will last. I figured the part with the water would feel as good to him as it did to me the time I tore ligaments in my ankle. The ice and cold felt sooo good as it numbed away the pain. Thanks as slways for reading and the next chappie's up now! More harry & Moon Fire bonding and more about Draco's past. |
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