well that was good and moon fire is well on the road to recovery, well his physical injuries at least
Loved this chapter. Nice to see the trust between Moon Fire and Harry.
I love that our Stallion is trusting Harry, and that the bond between them is strengthing--even if Sev isn't really himself right now. And the Moon Lady is taking care of both of our hurting children--even if that means challenging Harry and comforting 'Mionie.
Thank you for the update.
V.
that was another wonderful chapter. I'm impressed that Harry stayed behind and allowed Hermione and Draco to take Moon Fire, that had to be a turning point in the trust relationship of the three.
I'm glad that Harry is following Selene's advice and is allowing his heart and his instincts to guide him. I am confident that he will figure out a way to help Severus soon.
I wonder who Hermione's beloved it? I have a guess, of course, but I have been wrong many times before and so, will keep it to myself. :D
Great chapter!
Excellent chapter, I log in here everyday praying for this fic to be updated. You are writing the human/horse interactions brilliantly and so far I have not become lost in any aspect of horse care or in the current goings on. I love the banner and the picture and Moonfire are a throwback to the Black, I have a funny feeling that the horse in the banner is from 'The Young black Stallion' as the mysterious moon stallion that sired Shetan had large shire like hooves. I will watch the scene again later to double check. Post soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your really encouraging review. I think you're right, I know I've seen that picture before. I'm so glad you like this and have updated two more times since this post.
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| 02 Apr 2010 9:39 am
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wow! having Harry sleep in the barn was a brilliant idea!
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| 02 Apr 2010 8:02 am
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Great chapter! I am so glad that Harry has started to get Moon Fire to trust him, and that Moon Fire's leg is healing! I worried that aportkey would be too tough on his leg, but I guess not.
There was one typo that I noticed in the last paragraph... ..."and Hermione felt herself start to drift, lulled to sleep in Selene's embrace, her lasy coherent thought..." I think it's supposed to be "last."
Thanks for the update! I wonder if Hermione's "beloved" is Draco? or Harry?
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| 02 Apr 2010 7:42 am
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Oh I love how you describe selene! This chapter was great
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