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Reviews For Moon Fire
Title: Midnight Journey 30 Sep 2014 1:28 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent story so far, but I have to say that Selene is one of the most useless gods I've ever heard of in my life. Her powers seem extremely limited, of very little help to her followers, and even something as simple as travel takes days, in a dumbass little country like England.
Title: Midnight Journey 30 Jun 2010 10:22 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Anonymous) [Report This]
    yes harry got there safely, with abit of help, now the real work begins, come on harry get snape back
Title: Midnight Journey 20 May 2010 11:04 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    That was an awesome ride! Aww . . .poor Harry. I hope he can save Moon Fire. C'mon, Sev, remember who you are!
Title: Midnight Journey 20 May 2010 7:19 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    What a cool way to travel! I'm so glad Amicus is there I'm sure he can help Harry heal Moon Fire. And I think Titania is more than what she seems. A lot more.
Title: Midnight Journey 03 May 2010 7:08 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    If that is not a cliffhanger, I don't know what is.

    While I love this story and I understand the torture required to make it believable, I cannot stand animal abuse. One of the geldings at the stable where I ride at was whipped liked that; it took months and months of gentle handling for him to trust again. And then a woman bought him and reversed all the positiveness we'd put into him with a few well placed spurs and the use of a crop. If I ever get my hands on Lucius Malfoy...

    There are so many things I want to say in this review, but I'll bite my tongue because I don't want to spoil the surprise for the other readers. I will say this and I know you'll get it: How will Amicus react?

    An angry stallion is one thing, but an angry /unicorn/ stallion is another issue entirely...

    I know this is short and not very detailed, but I hope I've made your day with a review.

    Update soon. You know I'm always watching for them in my inbox.

    Yours,
    Julie
Title: Midnight Journey 24 Apr 2010 2:06 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's good that Harry has gotten to Riddle Manor safely; now the true adventure has begun. Will he be able to rescue his friends and loved ones without issue or will he be forced to face Deatheaters or even worse, Voldemort himself?

    Great chapter!
Title: Midnight Journey 23 Apr 2010 10:49 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow, oh wow! Poor Moon Fire! What a mess!

    I really hope that harry will be able to get all of them out of there! Wow.

    Amazing chapter and story.

    I enjoyed the scene of travel through the stars. I knew Titania was Selene!! I wonder what boy she will bring for the Dryad.

    Great job!

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