| Title: Midnight Spy
| 30 Jun 2010 10:45 pm
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| Reviewer: kreacher (Anonymous)
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great chapter, draco was really helpful and really wanting to help moonfire recover, hermione is fine aswell, i was abit surprised the belltrix is so tidy and has her things so organised, pettigrew should be killed as he's a disgrace to death eaters
Great job Harry and I do hope he can get Moon Fire to remember himself soon! They need to get out of there.
| Title: Midnight Spy
| 20 May 2010 7:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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haha! Peter got forked! Serves him right the miserable animal abuser. I hope Harry will be able to restore Moon Fire. I'm sure he will, he really loves that horse. And I hope that Lucius and Bella get theirs too!
glad to see the update but I have been enjoying Two Hawks as well. Good chapter.
And here I thought you said that Draco was going to be a minor character. Haha, that's fine. I like him right where he is.
Author's Response: He was. But then he told me otherwise, LOL!
Wonoderful chapter as always. I want to see Moon Fire get Wormtail in the worst way!!!! Pretty bad injuries when ever Lucius wants to pitch Wormtail. Thank you for the update.
I'm glad that Hermione has remained strong and hope that she will find that inner fire that tells her that she is more than good enough to rub shoulders with anyone. Perhaps having regular visits from her friends will help her to do so.
I think what Harry did to Wormtail was a good first step to winning Moon Fire's trust once again. I hope that Harry will be able to trigger his memories of being Severus as well. All three of these children need him to be back to himself and soon.
Great chapter!
Uh oh. I hope that Harry is well hidden. It wouldn't do to get caught sleeping in this place.
I am glad that Harry is able to take care of Moon Fire a bit. I thought that once her got to the Manor that everyone would be free and run off, but I suppose that Moon Fire has to heal a lot more before he can make the trip back home. Too bad they don't have a portkey or something.
Great chapter! thanks for the update! I have been missing them. :)
| Title: Midnight Spy
| 07 May 2010 9:07 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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It is a bit slow and I am eager to see them free, but I think you are doing it well. Because that's how things are in real life too, that things we want don't happen fast enough!
Though having Harry in that miserable place for more than 2-3 days might be inviting trouble.. After all, Lucius is smart and strong magically even if he is a evil git.
| Title: Midnight Spy
| 07 May 2010 8:26 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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I am so glad that moon fire is starting to trust harry. Good for harry, wish he would have sliced pettigrew in half, but I know now is not the time. Great chapter, please poost soon!
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