You were very creative with the curse for Bella, Lucius, and Peter. They were very fitting punishments.
Author's Response: Thanks! I try and make the punishment fit the crime and they really do deserve everything they got.
| Title: Midnight Uprising
| 30 Jun 2010 11:24 pm
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| Reviewer: kreacher (Anonymous)
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great chapter and bellatrix and lucius have certainly been payed back with all there abuse on other people, i wonder if the dark lord has a sense of humour lurking in him, even evil dark lords have abit of humour within. i'm glad they escaped.
i have wrecked two keyboards one with wine and one with coca cola
Yeah! That's the way to do it! Go Severus1 And go harry and Draco and Hermione! I love this!
And I'm so sorry about Gabriel. I just lost my dog too a few months ago and I still miss her. It's so awful when they die suddenly. It feels like your heart has been ripped out. But at least he didn't suffer. And now he's an angel.
| Title: Midnight Uprising
| 20 May 2010 7:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Oh those were great punishments. I hope Wormy gets fed to the tiger.
I'm so sorry about your collie, I lost one too like that. But you'll always have the memories of him and he'll be waiting for you in heaven.
| Title: Midnight Uprising
| 20 May 2010 6:29 pm
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| Reviewer: Poirot (Anonymous)
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Another great chapter! Thanks!
Fantastic chapter. I love the image of little Bella the terrier locked outside. Well written escape and the return of Severus Snape was handled with a master touch. Post soon.
My condolences on the death of Gabriel, I lost my collie of 14 years to organ failure this time last year. They are fantastic dogs and are well worth every penny spent.
| Title: Midnight Uprising
| 19 May 2010 9:01 pm
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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The idea of transfiguring wormtail into moon fire was brilliant! I am sorry to hear about the dog though...
First, I am sorry for you and your family's loss. He has company with my five kitties who have go "beyond the veil." I'm sure he's happy and healthy have the time of his life. Just image, being able to sit at the Master and his Son's feet, be petted by them, loved by them, and have all the friends to play with an be reunited with. I hope my five meets yours.....and they are all friends. This was such a wicked chapter! Love what is planned for Wormtail. Love that Bella is now the dog she always was! Thank you for the update. I look forward to seeing what Voldy will do with these three minons, plus one missing.....
I always thought that Bellatrix was one crazy bitch and now it's far more literal! Good job, Hermione! Lucius is getting taken down a few pegs and Pettigrew is about to become lunch. Ah...the joy of just desserts! All in all it's a fine day..xD! I wonder how long it will take for Voldemort to figure out that the dog is Bella and that the woman is the dog?
I'm sorry to hear about your loss. It's always terrible to lose a family member, whether human, canine, or any other breed.
| Title: Midnight Uprising
| 19 May 2010 10:35 am
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Sorry to hear about your sister's pup. It's always sad to lose a beloved pet.
You've done a wonderful job in telling this story.
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