| Title: Midnight Bond
| 30 Sep 2014 4:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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You can tell I'm involved in a story when I have dozens of questions. Here are a few. Where are all the Aurors who Andromeda promised to send to Riddle Mansion??? Severus says he may contact the Aurors tomorrow, but they should have been there much earlier in the week. I wonder what Andromeda and Narcissa would have been doing all week while Draco was held against his will. I can't comprehend why you would send Draco (alone!) back to Andromeda's unwarded estate, where Lucius could arrive at any moment. I would also think that the Grangers' house would have alarms to notifiy Bella whenever Hermione visits.
| Title: Midnight Bond
| 30 Mar 2011 2:21 am
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| Reviewer: Kait (Anonymous)
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Hermione already learned that Harry could do wand-less magic when Harry was showing her around in the library I thought?
Author's Response: Umm . . . I think you're getting this story confused with my other one, Return to Prince Manor, which has Harry and Draco showing Hermione how they know how to do wandless magic.
| Title: Midnight Bond
| 01 Jul 2010 12:14 am
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| Reviewer: kreacher (Anonymous)
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what a great chapter, everyone safely back home and fairly well back to normal, sev will get over what happened with hermione and harrys help, i hope draco got back safely
Loved it! So cool! I just love how they have all bonded like a real family. I feel bad for Hermione but somehow she will get through this with Harry and Sev's help and Selene's as well.
Author's Response: Yes, she will. It will just take time. Thanks for reading.
| Title: Midnight Bond
| 06 Jun 2010 4:34 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Sweetness! I love how Severus treated Hermione as well as Harry! I hope she comes to stay too! Great chapter! Please post the next part soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much1 I have just updated this!
Fantastic chapter! I just love fluffy bonding moments like this! They just melt my heart!
I also loved it when Harry comforted Sev after his nightmare, so cool!
Author's Response: Aww! Thanks a lot. I like the warmth and healing parts the best.
Wonderful chapter. I have a suspicion who Titania's identity is. But I won't say, less I ruin the suprise. You, my crafty Slytherin, are a very good author. :) Kudos.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! The next chapter's up now, so you can see if you're right!
Great chapter as always! I'm glad Sev is back from his ordeal. I like the friendship between Harry and Draco, and I hope it can survive school.
When Hermione was serving dinner, you mentioned four plates, shouldn't it have been three or did I miss something and Draco is back?
Great work! Thanks!
Author's Response: One never knows if something at school won't happen to either draw Draco and Harry together or apart. No, Draco's not back, when I was writing that part, I was setting my own table for dinner and we had four people, so that's how that ended up being four instead of three. Thanks for telling me. I have fixed it! And the next chapter's up!
Well written as always! :)
I just have one question, somewhere around the middle you write about Hermione cooking and then setting out four plates and the four eating together. But four? As far as I understand Draco has gone home and it's only Severus, Harry and Hermione. Did I miss something or is that a mistake?
Keep up the good work, I'm always looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! When I was writing that part, I was setting my own table for dinner and we had four people, so that's how that ended up being four instead of three. Thanks for telling me. I have fixed it! And the next chapter's up!
I'm really glad that they are home and safe at long last. I wonder if Severus will apply for guardianship of Hermione at least for now? It would probably be advisable for him to do so and quickly, if he is going to. I hope that Draco will be able to remain free of his father's clutches. Will Andromeda be able to keep him safe or will he too be staying with Severus for safety?
Author's Response: You'll find out the answer to that in the next chapter. Draco should be able to escape Lucius if Narcissa allows him to stay with Andromeda. Andromeda should be able to keep him safe, she didn't have wards raised against Lucius before because they were decieving him about the school. but now that he's disowned Draco, Andromeda will raise the wards against him. Severus has all he can handle with Harry and Hermione, it wouldn't be fair to throw another kid at him. I've just updated!
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