| Title: Midnight Secrets
| 30 Sep 2014 5:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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You write too many stories at once and forget the little details. In this chapter Hermione and Severus seemed surprised to be hugging while she cries, yet the previous evening he'd hugged her while she cried, and even pulled her into his lap while she continued to cry.
| Title: Midnight Secrets
| 13 Aug 2010 8:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Yes, i think Hermione was right, harry does need to have consequences and Severus wasn't being overly harsh. I loved how she told Harry about how she misbehaved as a child and everything. I think Hermione's real parents might be some purebloods or maybe even an immortal.
| Title: Midnight Secrets
| 01 Jul 2010 2:00 am
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| Reviewer: kreacher (Anonymous)
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i loved the interaction between harry and hermione, i wish she had a shorter name, hermione doesn't pull any punches does she? when something should be said she says it. harry deserved the punishment he got. hermiones stories of what she was like as a little girl made me smile and thats how i was, i went all out to get attention when i was growing up and the only attention i got was when i did naughty things, so i know what hermione was going through. i don't think hermione is muggle born at all, i think half blood, the pendant holds all the keys to her true parentage
Great job! I'm no good at picking names so I'll let some one else do that. I loved how Hermione told Harry off and how she bonded with Severus. Love to see more of it!
| Title: Midnight Secrets
| 15 Jun 2010 11:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Loved the chapter. Truly a wonderful take on everything. A name, hmm? How about Star Onyx? Star in honor of his silver hooves, and Onyx for his coat. Of course, it's your decision, but it is an idea. Kudos on a well written chapter.
| Title: Midnight Secrets
| 13 Jun 2010 8:44 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Yes, loved the conversation between Harry and Hermione. Sometimes you need a friend to tell you like it is! She really got harry to see how he was acting, and Hermione adopted, is she from a magic family? Great chapter.
| Title: Midnight Secrets
| 13 Jun 2010 8:02 am
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| Reviewer: PeriwinkleKitty (Anonymous)
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Allo there!
What a great chapter! great work, as per usual. Thanks for writing; I was missing my other regular update fic. It is now complete, and I have moved on to Moon Fire as the thing I religiously go to P&S to see.
Please, don't use the name onyx. It's so stereotypical.
I hope Hermione finds peace, and I hope to see more bonding from her and Severus, but also Severus and Harry.
About unicorn names...
Monomensis-> One Moon, Greek
or, if you like Latin
Uniluna,
But I really like Monomensis better.
So Hermione wasn't born a Granger? I wonder who her birth parents are and why they left her in a park? Is there more to the story than meets the eye? I have a feeling that the pendant will be key in proving that she was that baby and might even help them to discover who her birth parents are or were.
I hope that Harry really did absorb what Hermione was trying to tell him. He needs to learn to be careful what he says. I know that he didn't actually mean to be insulting to Severus, but he shouldn't have said it to begin with.
Names are difficult, aren't they?
Midnight
Shadow
Eclipse
| Title: Midnight Secrets
| 13 Jun 2010 1:50 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Beautiful!! The secret of Hermione was quite a surprise, but it lends further mystery to the story. I also liked that pieces between Harry and Hermione. They show that Hermione will always be a guiding hand for Harry (let's face it, he is VERY temperamental, isn't he?)
Great chapter!
Mice twist in your story! So will she be from a magical family after all? Enquiring minds want to know! ;-)
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