| Title: Midnight Avenger
| 14 Aug 2010 2:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Such an awesome battle scene! I hope Severus doesn't die! I read this last night but was too tired to review after it! Reading the next chapter now!
| Title: Midnight Avenger
| 03 Jul 2010 9:41 am
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| Reviewer: sweets2 (Anonymous)
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Finished reading the whole thing up to here. It's wonderful. I love the story. Please continue.
I am wondering if Harry as Midnight Wind may be able to heal Bill or is that going to stay cannonized?
Of course I want Severus to live! At least we all know that Moody will go to Valhala. I'm GLAD Luscious is dead and gone, Draco may feel a little sad that his dad is gone, but I doubt by much as he didn't act like a dad. Molly was brilliant. Hermione was brilliant and so was Moon Fire. I knew Bill was going to be hurt, I figured by a were, I'm assuming Greyback? Fits the discription anyway. Threw me for a loop calling him Billy though, but Charlie's his brother so of course he'd be Billy. Neat trick with the trees. Reminded me of Prince Caspian. If he worshipped the White Lady I bet he could have done that with willow trees as well as they are sacred to Her as well. I have more to say, but it's a little jumbled in my head right now.
| Title: Midnight Avenger
| 02 Jul 2010 11:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Tutti Frutti (Anonymous)
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Great chapter once again!!! I want Severus to live, and injured because I like that because I'm a sicko. lol I can't say I care about Dumbledore too much since he betrayed them. Meanie butt >_< But keep writing!!!!
Oh Sev has to live, Dumbles I can take or leave. Excellent chapter! I loved it!
| Title: Midnight Avenger
| 02 Jul 2010 7:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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This was an action packed battle! Very realistic. I'm glad Lucius got trampled and gored but I'm sad Moody died. Though he died the soldier's death, like a true warrior.
I just hope Severus takes out Voldy. Please do NOT kill him. He needs to take care of Harry and 'Mione!
Will we find out about Hermione's true heritage soon?
Hope your cousin is okay.
Such an awesome battle! I was on the edge of my seat and falling off!!
DON"T KILL SEVERUS!!
Oh no! Poor Bill! I do hope that Charlie will be able to heal him and that he will avoid being infected.
Moody died valiantly, which he is surely happy for. It is surely his chosen way to leave the world. I know that the Weasleys will honor his memory for his sacrifice.
Yikes! Harry went a bit crazy there for a second. The trampling of Lucius corpse was perhaps a bit overdone...not that I blame him, mind you! At least Draco won't ever have to worry about his father anymore.
I hope that Severus and Dumbledore will be alright and that they will find Voldemort's hiding place without too much trouble.
| Title: Midnight Avenger
| 02 Jul 2010 8:50 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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They both have to live, please. I wanted them both to live in the books, Sev needs to be there for Harry and Hermione. Great chapter.
Severus had BETTER live!!!!! I love this story and that would absolutely destroy it. If you want, you may kill off Albus--I would miss him, but the story would survivie.
Great battle chatper! Well written, clear to follow. Lots of great action and emotion.
Looking forward to your next update.
V.
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