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Reviews For Moon Fire
Author's Response: Thanks, that's what I was going for. I see no reason why you can't be tasteful in describing romantic scenes, especially because it's HP and there's really no need to go into explicit detail in a series that was originally meant for children. Besides, I find it more steamy to imagine my own love scenes.
It's good that Severus finally has someone who loves him without reservations. At least this time he won't have to worry about being hurt or rejected. I know that if they ever have a child Severus will be a protective and loving father who will do whatever it takes to see to his child's health and happiness. He has already proven his worth as a parent and I hope that he will get the chance to continue his line. It will take Ron time to absorb this, but I am sure that he will get over his shock in time. He will come to see that his friends are happy and well taken care of and that should be enough to satisfy him that they are okay. I don't know that he will ever 'like' Severus, but hopefully he will come to realize that he IS the best guardian for Harry and Hermione.
Hmm... I enjoyed the interaction between both Sirius and Danae and Selene and Severus. Contrary to popular belief, I do enjoy the occasional dip in to a hot and steamy romance scene. I will admit that you startled me with the thought of Severus having a child with Selene but you are the writer and you may proceed however you see fit. I hope Ron doesn't turn out to be a prick because that would be horrible for both Harry and Hermione. While he is a git at times, he is a true friend and I don't think he'd allow Harry's parentage to get in the way. Ron's still free to hate the man - but in the privacy of his own mind. By the way... Did you get my e-mail I sent you the other day? I hope your hand heals soon. And, how far, exactly, are you planning on taking the story? Until next time!
I think She is right about Sev being over protective over his children, but I only want them to have children if we can read about them growing up. I hate when a couple get pregnant then the author leave the story with "and they lived happily ever after" That's bull! Life is full of challenges and that's what makes life interesting. I haven't decided about Sirius' kids, I think it would be cool though, especially if we get to visit them.
The consummations were very tastefully described while still touching the heart and emotions fully. I especially thank you for giving Sirius the inspiration he needs to finish growing up... I always felt that Rowling had left him "unfinished" and it was so nice to see him finally start to take responsibility and to truly love someone, not just lust after them. And our dear Severus... what can I say that will adequately describe how wonderful your interpretation of him is; how you have through the course of this tale developed him as a character and a person. He has been reborn, and in other ways has finally matured. He is starting to see past the snarky, nasty, lonely image that he had portrayed all those years, and is starting to see what has always been in his heart and soul. He's believing in himself, and his value for himself rather than the tasks he can perform. These were two very gorgeous wedding nights, and I thank you for them. Well done!
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