| Title: Midnight Bond
| 30 Sep 2014 4:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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You can tell I'm involved in a story when I have dozens of questions. Here are a few. Where are all the Aurors who Andromeda promised to send to Riddle Mansion??? Severus says he may contact the Aurors tomorrow, but they should have been there much earlier in the week. I wonder what Andromeda and Narcissa would have been doing all week while Draco was held against his will. I can't comprehend why you would send Draco (alone!) back to Andromeda's unwarded estate, where Lucius could arrive at any moment. I would also think that the Grangers' house would have alarms to notifiy Bella whenever Hermione visits.
| Title: Midnight Journey
| 30 Sep 2014 1:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Excellent story so far, but I have to say that Selene is one of the most useless gods I've ever heard of in my life. Her powers seem extremely limited, of very little help to her followers, and even something as simple as travel takes days, in a dumbass little country like England.
| Title: Midnight Struggle
| 29 Sep 2014 4:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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So what happened to Harry's knowledge of the speaking with horses spell?
| Title: Midnight Tragedy
| 29 Sep 2014 4:21 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Exciting chapter, and no tears at all, despite the warning.
Some confusion though....Earlier in the story, Snape told Harry not to write to Ron about staying at Snape's house. Harry agreed, then wrote to Hermione about it. I thought it was dangerous, but now she acts like she had no idea where he's been. For awhile, I'd thought it was good she knew he was there, so she wouldn't get upset if she read a news article about the Dursley deaths. Oh well.
| Title: Midnight Advice
| 29 Sep 2014 4:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Gee, why don't they stand around and talk for another 20 minutes or maybe an hour, and give more people time to die?
| Title: Midnight Frolic
| 28 Sep 2014 2:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I love the Fetch spell. "He snapped his fingers and Fetched a small earthenware jar of Abrasion Soothing Salve...."
| Title: Midnight Confrontation
| 28 Sep 2014 1:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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If you look up gout on the Mayo Clinic website, you'll see that high fructose corn syrup can cause uric acid levels to rise in people who have poor kidney function. High uric acid levels cause crystals to form in the joints (causing arthritic gout symptoms), and also in the muscles in some people. Wiki has a page on myofascial pain syndrome. People who are diagnosed with fibromyalgia should try giving up all high fructose corn syrup and all bread products with malt (another twice-processed intense form of carbohydrate). Information about how barley is processed into malt, and how corn syrup is processed into high fructose corn syrup can be found online. Wiki has simple explanations of malt and high fructose corn syrup.
| Title: Epilogue: Midnight Family
| 24 Apr 2014 11:37 am
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| Reviewer: Dreamweaver (Anonymous)
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This story, like those others of yours that I have read, is captivating and thrillsome. Do, please, write a sequel for it, I would love to see more of these characters - and these interpretations of canon characters. Forms, particularly, such as Stryker. Do unicorn healing powers extend to easing harmful emotion? Does unicorn horn grow back, like antlers? There would seem to be little stigma attached to its use in potions, after all. Would a unicorn horn stirrer be beneficial to healing potions? Please excuse the babbling~
| Title: Epilogue: Midnight Family
| 21 Feb 2014 12:05 am
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| Reviewer: briannacc (Anonymous)
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I am Interest in a sequel please do one please thank you I love all your story,s
| Title: Midnight Confrontation
| 28 Oct 2013 2:01 pm
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| Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy (Anonymous)
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Well, it's very good, but so few characters have been introduced. Also, when brewing potions, you let them simmer.
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