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Title: Midnight Farewell 10 Jul 2010 10:04 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Severus was able to heal Sirius. I hope that they will be able to forge a better relationship in the future. I was amused when Sirius ended up being Danae's mate and, now that I think of it, it makes a weird sort of sense.

    It's good that Severus was able to help alleviate some of the symptoms of Bill's infection with Apollo's help. It's too bad that they couldn't cure him, but sometimes things are just meant to be.

    I wonder what Hermione's connection to the unicorns is?

    P.S. I hope you get to feeling better soon!
Title: Midnight Farewell 10 Jul 2010 9:48 am
Reviewer: Antigone1Evenstar (Signed) [Report This]
    Never thought Sirius and Danae...wow. Eager for the next chapter.
Title: Midnight Farewell 10 Jul 2010 7:24 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I thought I saw in a health magazine where they thought they found something new to help FM. I'll try to look it up for you.
Title: Midnight Farewell 10 Jul 2010 6:45 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    loved this chapter. i agree the heat has the FM acting up. looking forward to finding out about Hermione's heritage.
Title: Midnight Farewell 10 Jul 2010 6:26 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved the part where Apollo comes and heals Bill and also how you handled Sirius. It's great.

    I am sorry about the pain though. I will pray for you so you may find healing or at least relief..
Title: Midnight Farewell 10 Jul 2010 5:53 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    beautifully done memorial service, and the visit to the graves of Lily and James.

    So, Our Hermionie is some how connected to the unicorns? cool!

    Hope you are feeling better soon.

    Thanks for the update.
    V.
Title: MIdnight Avatar 09 Jul 2010 10:45 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay, Sev lives! Kudos on a well done chapter.
Title: MIdnight Avatar 06 Jul 2010 9:47 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter, yes, I am so glad that Severus didn't die, can Sirius survive too? Can Sirius survive becuase of Severus, that would be a life debt, and an interesting twist for Sirius and Severus. Please post more soon!
Title: MIdnight Avatar 06 Jul 2010 12:14 am
Reviewer: Periwinkle (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please don't kill/disfigure Siri. Anyway, cool chappie, too bad about Dumbles. Happy 4th!
Title: MIdnight Avatar 05 Jul 2010 11:58 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank You! I probably would have stopped reading if you had killed him off.

    This was a wonderfully composed chapter. The intensity of the interactions between the characters was masterfully written. I do feel sorry for Albus--not that he died, but that his illusions about Tom where so completely shattered.

    If at all possible, please allow Siri to survive--even if scarred. I always hated that he died in the original series.

    Thanks for the 4th of July gift.

    V.

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