Such an awesome battle! I was on the edge of my seat and falling off!!
DON"T KILL SEVERUS!!
Oh no! Poor Bill! I do hope that Charlie will be able to heal him and that he will avoid being infected.
Moody died valiantly, which he is surely happy for. It is surely his chosen way to leave the world. I know that the Weasleys will honor his memory for his sacrifice.
Yikes! Harry went a bit crazy there for a second. The trampling of Lucius corpse was perhaps a bit overdone...not that I blame him, mind you! At least Draco won't ever have to worry about his father anymore.
I hope that Severus and Dumbledore will be alright and that they will find Voldemort's hiding place without too much trouble.
| Title: Midnight Avenger
| 02 Jul 2010 8:50 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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They both have to live, please. I wanted them both to live in the books, Sev needs to be there for Harry and Hermione. Great chapter.
Severus had BETTER live!!!!! I love this story and that would absolutely destroy it. If you want, you may kill off Albus--I would miss him, but the story would survivie.
Great battle chatper! Well written, clear to follow. Lots of great action and emotion.
Looking forward to your next update.
V.
that was great, very well written, glad lucius and bellatrix got killed, the giants were dealt with well, voldy must be having a huge tantrum now that lucius is dead. sev will survive - starts looking for authors address if sev doesn't, dumbles to die
great chapter v. well written please update soon thanks :)
wow, very exciting. i think that since there are no 'character death' warnings....i'm hopeful that no one major will die. But then....not putting up the warning might be the whole point - u know, spoilers and all.
| Title: Midnight Avenger
| 01 Jul 2010 10:28 pm
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Amazing! You really have a gift for writing magical battles!
| Title: Midnight Avenger
| 01 Jul 2010 9:40 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Not Sev! Don't kill Sev off! I liked the chapter, full of action as it was. Will there be a chapter in say, three-four chapters hence, when it will be calm again? Kudos on a well written chapter, and best wishes for all.
| Title: Midnight Summoning
| 01 Jul 2010 2:51 am
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| Reviewer: kreacher (Anonymous)
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great that the order got assembled rlatively quickly, dumbles must die a painful death for causing harry pain, i forgot what sevs name was and got carried away with the moment i think, or a touch of amnesia.
the dark lord always has something up his sleeve, its called an arm
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