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Reviews For Moon Fire
Title: Midnight Sanctuary 08 Mar 2010 3:14 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Love Sev's home! It sounds so peaceful!
Title: Midnight Regrets 08 Mar 2010 3:02 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    wonderful....i think Sev needs to tell him soon so he can keep Harry's trust.
Title: Midnight Regrets 07 Mar 2010 8:09 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked the chapter, but didn't like the way you slandered Dumbledore. There was no need for the part about him being naked and all that.
Title: Midnight Confrontation 07 Mar 2010 6:39 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Ha! I love the idea of Severus bowing formally to Hermione - great mental imagery there. I've finally got around to reading again - and I can definitely say that this chapter was worth the wait!

    I wonder if Harry really will get to ride Moon Fire in the end... I can't tell you how many times I've wanted to read a horseanimagus!Severus story - and this one contains everything I'd wanted to read in one ;)
Title: Midnight Regrets 07 Mar 2010 3:00 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    not confusing at all. . .this chapter was very well done. I liked Sev "taking on" Albus for Harry's sake.

    As for Moon Fire--usually sooner is better. . . maybe let the boy out in the early evening, and have Moon Fire be there and then change?

    V.
Title: Midnight Sanctuary 07 Mar 2010 2:15 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    What a beautiful chapter! I loved the end too. Snape can protect Harry best as his guardian.
Title: Midnight Sanctuary 07 Mar 2010 10:13 am
Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Amazing chapter. You are creating such a fascinating world. This chapter was filled with peace.
Title: Midnight Resolution 07 Mar 2010 6:05 am
Reviewer: snapeangel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    the conversation went well i think..good to catch the old man asleep really lol

    pretty obvious that severus wants to be sure he can do what he needs to do if he finds potters home life isn't peaches and cream like he had (and everyone else) always thought it was

    love how this is going!
Title: Midnight Frolic 07 Mar 2010 6:03 am
Reviewer: snapeangel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    loved MF playing with the colts ... too cute

    you have severus pegged so well in this one...i can just see his expressions in so many of these scenes! lol
Title: Midnight Rescue 07 Mar 2010 6:01 am
Reviewer: snapeangel (Anonymous) [Report This]
    love how moon fire rescued harry and let him ride him..very cool

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