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Title: Midnight on Privet Drive 06 Mar 2010 9:11 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a great chapter, I love that Sev got harry to open up and I am thrilled that the dursleys will get theres and harry will be away from them! YEAH!
Title: Midnight Sanctuary 06 Mar 2010 8:50 am
Reviewer: Kazza (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I was really enjoying the story until the 60 acres of land was mentioned. That must have been one great land deal considering that 30 acres in Nottinghamshire is about 1 million pounds. So the house and land would be cheap at say 2 million to 2.4 million pounds. May I suggest that you make it 6 acres not 60 - which would be more believable.
Title: Midnight Sanctuary 06 Mar 2010 7:09 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Beautiful chapter! I loved every bit of it! I was a bit disappointed in the previous chapter, but this one is fantastic!

    I hope you haven't abondoned two hawks hunting thought!
Title: Midnight Sanctuary 06 Mar 2010 5:24 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter! I love Snape's house I want to live in it. And Selene is really interesting. I like how she is portrayed. Write more soon! Loved the dream and everything!
Title: Midnight's Justice 06 Mar 2010 5:12 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes! oh that was so Perfect! I loved it! Can't wait to read the next part. Petunia screaming over the frogs and bigs was Sooo Funny!
Title: Midnight's Justice 06 Mar 2010 4:08 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Go Snape! I would have been so freaked if that had happened in my home. But they really did deserve it for being so terrible! Beautiful!

    Author's Response: me too! I hate spiders! Really hate them. But they did deserve it.
Title: Midnight's Justice 06 Mar 2010 1:28 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    This was great, all of it. Can't wait for the next!

    Author's Response: Thanks I should have a new chapter up shortly!
Title: Midnight on Privet Drive 06 Mar 2010 12:59 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank all that is Holy for Snape, eh? Lovely chapter.

    Author's Response: Oh yeah. Thanks so much!
Title: Midnight's Justice 05 Mar 2010 1:05 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Too bad that the Dursleys never understood that Harry's living with them was the only reason that they were alive. Muggle relatives are favorite targets of the Deatheaters. I do wish that they had been punished even more, but am glad that it was enough to get them to sign Harry's guardianship over to Severus without a fuss.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Yes, they are. The DE just love to crush them.  Only the wards prevented that, but the Dursleys never knew that.  Snape didn't want to draw it out, for Harry's sake.  Thanks and there's a new one up!
Title: Midnight's Justice 05 Mar 2010 9:40 am
Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    The Plague of a Thousand Curses would certainly be a nightmare for me. This reminded me of rainy season in Japan when the frogs would be out in droves and I would have to side-step them. Excellent revenge scenario and quite fun to read.

    Author's Response: Yeah me too! I'd be a candidate for an asylum.  Sounds like the frogs down in Florida during the summer. One tree frog once got stuck on my windsgield while I was driving to work down there and it was still there when I pulled up, alive.  But I never minded them cause they ate all the disgusting bugs. Hope you like the new chapter I've posted.

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