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Reviews For Moon Fire
Title: Midnight Rescue 26 Feb 2010 12:32 pm
Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You write so beautifully; it is a pleasure to read. I especially like how you write Moon Fire and can get a picture of him and his actions. Additionally, the horse's personality, while similar to Snape's is unique to that persona and adds greater depth to him. I get the sense that Moon Fire is the very essence of Snape, what he'd be like if he did not carry around on his shoulders all of the emotional baggage of his past.

    Author's Response: You are right, Moon Fire is, in essence, Snape's soul. When the goddess gave him that form, she knew this and the horse is the purest expression of himself. Thanks so much for reading!
Title: Midnight Confrontation 26 Feb 2010 6:12 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww I wanted to see who the enemies were! This is awesome!

    Hope you're feeling better!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I am now.  You'll see who the enemies are in my new chapter I've posted.
Title: Midnight Confrontation 26 Feb 2010 5:48 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope you're feeling better now and that you posted the next part soon because I really want to know what happened. This is a wonderful story, I love it!

    Author's Response: Aww thanks! That makes me feel lots better and I've posted my new chapter so please R & R!
Title: Midnight Confrontation 26 Feb 2010 5:46 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved how Snape was all nasty and then he showed his caring side by taking care of Harry's burn. He's starting to see the light.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I enjoyed writing that part and yes, a clue has begun to dawn in Snape's cunning brain.
Title: Midnight Confrontation 25 Feb 2010 10:40 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    While it wasn't nice of Severus to take Harry's cloak, I perfectly understand why he did. He is trying to protect Harry in a way, by limiting his ability to wander at night. I wonder if Hermione is right about Severus giving it back after a weeks time?

    It's hard to find out that your assumptions are way off the mark, particularly when you have used them as an excuse to dislike and pick on someone. I hope that Severus will be able to break through Harry's wall of distrust and find out the truth about his home life.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, that's true. I always thought it purely irresponsible of AD to give Harry that cloak as a firstie. I mean, what else would a kid use that FOR if not to get into trouble??

    She is, Severus will not keep those items, though he may confiscate them again if Harry misuses them.

    Yes and that truth will be coming soon. Thanks again. Hope you enjoy the next one!

Title: Midnight Confrontation 25 Feb 2010 9:55 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    i hope whatever fibromalgia goes away soon so you feel better!
    i think severus asking questions *cough* kindly...will begin the trust?

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much!

    Yes, that's true. Of course, Harry may not answer them.

    Hope you enjoy the next part!

Title: Midnight Confrontation 25 Feb 2010 7:59 am
Reviewer: Hobbit_Me (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Aw, Snapes being all carrying! Now I can't wait until you post arg, I want to know what happens lol! But no rush ;). Thanks for posting. I look foward to reading the rest!

    Author's Response: Yes that's true. Dontcha love it? I just posted again, so no fear of waiting ;) Glad you like this so much!
Title: Midnight Confrontation 25 Feb 2010 7:53 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Take care of yourself! I think Harry needs to trust someone to help him, maybe hermione can help convince him. Snape is actually doing all of the right things. Great Chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hermione will try her best. And yes, Severus is trying also to find out what he can.  Hope you like my new chapter!
Title: Midnight Confrontation 25 Feb 2010 2:22 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for the update. I truely enjoyed this chapter. I'm glad Sev is actulally seeing a bit of Harry here--instead of just "the boy who lived to give him headaches"!

    V.

    Author's Response: Right, he sure is! And he needs to see this, otherwise he will continue to treat Harry in the old manner, and that is not fair.
Title: Midnight Confrontation 25 Feb 2010 2:22 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for the update. I truely enjoyed this chapter. I'm glad Sev is actulally seeing a bit of Harry here--instead of just "the boy who lived to give him headaches"!

    V.

    Author's Response: Yes, he sure is!

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