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Reviews For Moon Fire
Title: Midnight Rendezvous 23 Feb 2010 12:36 pm
Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no - what's Snape going to do! Another absorbing chapter! I'm really enjoying the build-up you have here.

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to draw out their little meetings because this story initially will take place over a week and then will move more quickly. As for what he'll do, read the next chapter I've posted!
Title: Midnight Rendezvous 23 Feb 2010 10:32 am
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I am so glad you update I wuld love to read more please!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! More is posted.
Title: Midnight Rendezvous 23 Feb 2010 7:35 am
Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! I love the beautiful imagery and description in this. Hermione's perception is excellent and I am really looking forward to reading more.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I try and give readers enough description so they can "see" what I do in my head. hermione is very perceptive her, and also knows when to keep her mouth shut. Hope you enjoy the rest!
Title: Midnight Rendezvous 23 Feb 2010 6:49 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really glad that Severus decided to listen in on Harry and Hermione's conversation. It opened his eyes some and this change in his perceptions might enable him to get closer to Harry in time. Maybe he will even figure out the full truth about the Dursleys and get Harry safely away from them.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    It did and yes, he will eventually learn all about the terrible horrible no good ought to be in jail Dursleys!

    Thanks so much for reading!

Title: Midnight Run 22 Feb 2010 2:31 am
Reviewer: stevie736 (Signed) [Report This]
    Can't wait to see what you have in store for this one. Great work.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hope you enjoy it!
Title: Midnight Run 21 Feb 2010 5:49 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    A beautiful story is unfolding here. I love horses, too, though we only have one mini. We board some beautiful stallions in our barn and being with them takes so much pain away. I'm glad to see such a story as yours. I hope it continues for a long time.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much. I do plan on it continuing for quite some time.
Title: Midnight Run 20 Feb 2010 8:59 am
Reviewer: puregarnet (Signed) [Report This]
    I adoreee your style of writing! Its so dreamy... please update soon!1

    Author's Response: Thanks and I have! So hope you enjoy the next parts!
Title: Midnight Run 19 Feb 2010 6:56 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh I love it! Please continue! I loved all the parts with the unicorns and everything. I hope Severus will bond with Harry and get to know him better.

    Author's Response: Severus will, eventually. Hope you enjoy the rest.
Title: Midnight Run 19 Feb 2010 6:45 pm
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    I am glad you"wrote this down" and I hope you continue. I love the images you have painted here, and hope that a bond can form between the horse and his boy. . .

    Looking forward to more!
    V.

    Author's Response: Thanks and yes, that is what will eventually happen--the bond between the horse and the boy will also become the bond between the boy and the man.
Title: Midnight Run 19 Feb 2010 5:57 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Such beautiful descriptions! I was able to feel and see and hear the unicorn herd running with Moon Fire. I love Severus as a horse, he sounds so mysterious and gorgeous.

    Poor Harry, I hope Sev can find out what's wrong with him. It's probably Cedric. Update soon! This is going to be a beautiful story, like all your others!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks I really appreciate that.

    Harry is upset over Cedric but he's also upset over something else too, as you'll see.


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