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Title: Midnight Reunion 07 Aug 2010 6:24 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Make him earn it, if he gets one at all. Ron's a bigoted ass.
Title: Midnight Reunion 04 Aug 2010 11:45 pm
Reviewer: Elphaba (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Loved them getting back together. Ron should get one, but I think he needs to earn it, not sure how though?
Title: Midnight Reunion 04 Aug 2010 4:27 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's really sad that Ron always requires proof. I guess he is just one of those people that have to be repeated beaten about the head before he will see the truth that is right before his eyes. I do understand his feeling of being left out, but does he really want to have had the kind of summer that Hermione and Harry experienced? I doubt it. He should be thankful for the boredom....

    I don't feel that Ron has earned a Goddess-given animagus form. I also have the sinking feeling that he would possibly be the type to abuse such a gift if given it. I see nothing wrong with him learning to become an animagus though.

    I'm really happy that Harry and Hermione are remaining firm in their decision to become friends with Draco. I do hope that Ron will eventually grow up and realize that life is too short to continue such childish and petty behavior. He really needs to get over his prejudices towards Slytherins because it really isn't fair to hate someone simply because of the House they are sorted into. I do hope that someone will be able to talk some sense into him.
Title: Midnight Reunion 03 Aug 2010 3:50 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    This was agreat chapter! I think Ron should learn to be an animagus from a teacher, especially as he is still trying to figure out his own choices in regards to religion. Besides then he can tease Harry that he was smart enough to learn to do it the hard way while Harry had to be given his form. :) I'm looking forward tothe next chapter but will be sad to see this story end. It's been a lovely journey.
Title: Midnight's Promise 31 Jul 2010 7:31 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    *falls over laughing* Oh Ron, what have you gotten yourself into? Don't you know better then to irritate Hermione? Kudos on two wonderful chapters.
Title: Midnight's Promise 28 Jul 2010 3:52 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehhe, good chapter. :) Love Draco's form, and its name. I'm glad that Sirius and Snape apologized. It's nice that Snape is helping him get a house.
Title: Midnight's Promise 28 Jul 2010 1:23 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    So she doesn't trample him is a very viable concern I think. I love Stryker. I'd love to see more of Draco and Stryker.
    Thank you.
Title: Midnight's Promise 27 Jul 2010 9:53 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I was expecting that reaction from Ron, sad to say. Ron has always had difficulty believing in such possibilities and is rather close-minded at times. I look forward to the lecture he has earned.

    It will take a long time for Severus and Sirius to reach any form of comfort with each other's company, but this is a start. I'm just glad to see them trying to 'get along'.

    I wonder how the school will react to Draco's new friends? I have a feeling that their is going to be some very shocked students and teachers! :D
Title: Midnight Consort 26 Jul 2010 7:27 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's going to be very difficult for Sirius to apologize for all the horrid things that he did to Severus, but it needs to be done. Not because of Selene or other such reason, but because it is simply right to do so. Severus never deserved the treatment the Marauders gave him and I'm glad that Sirius is finally beginning to understand that. I am glad that Sirius has finally found happiness in Danae's arms, whether they have children or not.

    It's good that Severus finally has someone who loves him without reservations. At least this time he won't have to worry about being hurt or rejected. I know that if they ever have a child Severus will be a protective and loving father who will do whatever it takes to see to his child's health and happiness. He has already proven his worth as a parent and I hope that he will get the chance to continue his line.

    It will take Ron time to absorb this, but I am sure that he will get over his shock in time. He will come to see that his friends are happy and well taken care of and that should be enough to satisfy him that they are okay. I don't know that he will ever 'like' Severus, but hopefully he will come to realize that he IS the best guardian for Harry and Hermione.
Title: Midnight Consort 21 Jul 2010 6:36 am
Reviewer: plaawlod (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I kind of want to see Sev with twin girls :P I think it would make things more interesting for him, but probably more difficult for you to write plot wise. I'm enjoying this one very much so far, as I have enjoyed many of your works ^_^

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