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Reviews For Moon Fire
Hmm... I enjoyed the interaction between both Sirius and Danae and Selene and Severus. Contrary to popular belief, I do enjoy the occasional dip in to a hot and steamy romance scene. I will admit that you startled me with the thought of Severus having a child with Selene but you are the writer and you may proceed however you see fit. I hope Ron doesn't turn out to be a prick because that would be horrible for both Harry and Hermione. While he is a git at times, he is a true friend and I don't think he'd allow Harry's parentage to get in the way. Ron's still free to hate the man - but in the privacy of his own mind. By the way... Did you get my e-mail I sent you the other day? I hope your hand heals soon. And, how far, exactly, are you planning on taking the story? Until next time!
I think She is right about Sev being over protective over his children, but I only want them to have children if we can read about them growing up. I hate when a couple get pregnant then the author leave the story with "and they lived happily ever after" That's bull! Life is full of challenges and that's what makes life interesting. I haven't decided about Sirius' kids, I think it would be cool though, especially if we get to visit them.
The consummations were very tastefully described while still touching the heart and emotions fully. I especially thank you for giving Sirius the inspiration he needs to finish growing up... I always felt that Rowling had left him "unfinished" and it was so nice to see him finally start to take responsibility and to truly love someone, not just lust after them. And our dear Severus... what can I say that will adequately describe how wonderful your interpretation of him is; how you have through the course of this tale developed him as a character and a person. He has been reborn, and in other ways has finally matured. He is starting to see past the snarky, nasty, lonely image that he had portrayed all those years, and is starting to see what has always been in his heart and soul. He's believing in himself, and his value for himself rather than the tasks he can perform. These were two very gorgeous wedding nights, and I thank you for them. Well done!
Next, thank you for this wonderful chapter with all the excitement and revelations and joy at the end of it. I love the complexity of the tale, and all the neat things that you have woven into the characters. I can hardly wait to read the next part, particularly Ron's reaction. Like the other chapters, this one was exceedingly Well Done! :)
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