| Title: Making a Stand
| 07 Dec 2017 7:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
I hate that you didn't include any outsie dialogue from Dumbledore. It's difficult to maintain a feel of familiarity with the other characters and thus your personal HP setting/tone if I don't hear what's going on outside a single characters head...or even what that character is reacting to.
Author's Response: Unfortunately, I was only allowed for this part to use Snape's inner monologue and thoughts. That's why I had the second story that isn't necessarily to the challenge. Thanks for the review.
xD You tell him Severus! I wonder if Severus will eventually take Harry under his wing? I hope so; I think that they would do quite well together.
Nice start to this story!
Author's Response: I agree with you. I think they would definitely do well together. I'll try to update as soon as I can. Thanks for the review.
| Title: Making a Stand
| 06 Mar 2010 8:49 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Great chapter, I am hooked on this story. Harry should have been with Snape, I'm glad dumbledore sees it, now he has to convince Sev. Please post soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'll definitely try to update as soon as I can. Thanks for your review.
Looove it! So what will Snape do, now that he has realized this? Fantastic beginning. Please continue!
Author's Response: Honestly, I haven't gotten the foggiest idea what's going to happen. I might turn this into a Snape vs. Dumbledore story because we don't really get enough of those, but I truly do not know. I do know that I loved writing this second chapter because it's so different from what I usually write. I'll try to update as soon as possible. Thanks for the review.
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