Title: All a Matter of Perception
| 13 Mar 2010 4:54 am
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Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
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Oh, great chapter again! I really loved it. You have great insight into Severus, and I loved how surprised he was when Minerva calmly agreed.
I have a feeling that Harry might not be though!
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I was kind of unsure when writing if I should have Minerva fight for Harry or not. I might revist that in a later chapter because Minerva doesn't seem to be the type of woman who lets things go that easily. I'm currently working on the fourth chapter right now. It should be up today (3/13) sometime.
xD You tell him Severus! I wonder if Severus will eventually take Harry under his wing? I hope so; I think that they would do quite well together.
Nice start to this story!
Author's Response: I agree with you. I think they would definitely do well together. I'll try to update as soon as I can. Thanks for the review.
Title: Making a Stand
| 06 Mar 2010 8:49 am
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Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Great chapter, I am hooked on this story. Harry should have been with Snape, I'm glad dumbledore sees it, now he has to convince Sev. Please post soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'll definitely try to update as soon as I can. Thanks for your review.
Title: Seeing is Believing
| 06 Mar 2010 1:43 am
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Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Great start! I love the last line.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Looove it! So what will Snape do, now that he has realized this? Fantastic beginning. Please continue!
Author's Response: Honestly, I haven't gotten the foggiest idea what's going to happen. I might turn this into a Snape vs. Dumbledore story because we don't really get enough of those, but I truly do not know. I do know that I loved writing this second chapter because it's so different from what I usually write. I'll try to update as soon as possible. Thanks for the review.
Title: Seeing is Believing
| 28 Feb 2010 4:11 pm
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Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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I actually would like to see another chapter like this. Maybe that night at dinner when Snape has had more time to think about it?
Author's Response: I hadn't thought about writing another chapter, but I am now. If I can find some time, I'll definitely write some more. Thank you for your review, hawkswench.
Title: Seeing is Believing
| 26 Feb 2010 11:47 pm
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Reviewer: Nyx the Panther (Anonymous)
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Please tell me you are adding another story too this! You have left this perfect opening for one, heck this could be a first chap if you wanted. Anyway this was interesting. Nyx :)
Author's Response: I hadn't thought about adding more chapters to it, but I'm definitely thinking about it now. If I can get some free time, I'll try to write another chapter. Thanks, Nyx.
Title: Seeing is Believing
| 26 Feb 2010 12:38 pm
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Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous)
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Intriguing look into Severus' thoughts. I love how you draw us in through his initial disdain of 'Potter' and then bring us to the point of acceptance as Severus realizes there is more to Harry than he first thought. Lovely look at the duel and what could have happened.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, KKJ.
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