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Title: Chapter 1 12 May 2011 4:29 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I don't like that you screwed with the backstory and made Severus a pureblood but I want to see where you go with the story.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah. I've a nasty habit of throwing out backstory for my own devious purposed. As for the pureblood thing... weeeell, I haven't touched on that, just yet. I imagine it will be coming up pretty soon, though.

    Thanks for the feedback - glad chapter one managed to draw you in despite elements you don't care for.

Title: Chapter 1 30 Jan 2011 12:15 am
Reviewer: topsell (Signed) [Report This]
    I do like the concept - it is cliche in a sense, but I do think that you have a lot of potential with this particular fic. My only issue was you not telling me that there was a time jump...though me not picking it up for a moment or two might just be due to my own exhaustion.

    Looking forward to what's to come!
Title: Chapter 1 30 Jan 2011 12:15 am
Reviewer: topsell (Signed) [Report This]
    I do like the concept - it is cliche in a sense, but I do think that you have a lot of potential with this particular fic. My only issue was you not telling me that there was a time jump...though me not picking it up for a moment or two might just be due to my own exhaustion.

    Looking forward to what's to come!
Title: Chapter 1 23 Mar 2010 12:09 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, I guess I know where it goes... Nice story so far! Mila
Title: Chapter 1 10 Mar 2010 5:53 am
Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great set-up for the story. I like how you started with Lily and Severus, giving us a small portion of their background and then showed how Severus' foul mood impacted his grading of the Gryffindors' papers. I am very intrigued to see just what will be revealed in Lily's diary.
Title: Chapter 1 07 Mar 2010 8:13 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I like how you make Snape a real bastard in this. I love a mean Snape!

    I can't wait to see Snape's reaction to what I think is going to be news he's not going to like!

    Very nice beginning. I can't wait to read more.

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