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Title: Chapter 3 23 Mar 2010 12:18 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Why Harry was not defiant? I wonder... Mila
Title: Chapter 3 11 Mar 2010 3:29 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I just wanted you to know that I am really enjoying this story! It's so well-written and very believable! I loved reading Lily's diary entries. In just a few brief entries you have made her very real.

    No wonder Severus is so conflicted, but poor Harry. I am glad that Severus realized he was being unfair and let Harry off.

    Now I am so eager for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    I had fun figuring out what would be contained in the journal, so I'm glad to hear you enjoyed them!

    Thanks for the R&R - more to come! ^^

Title: Chapter 3 11 Mar 2010 2:30 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd@gmail.com (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story so far! Well written. You seem to be keeping Snape in character and making Harry's conception plausible. The angst is certainly there. Poor Lily!! I also like your Harry. Not loved by the Dursleys, but he is accepting of that fact and rising above it as he did in canon.

    Again, great story. Hope you continue with it on a regular basis.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! Glad I'm succeeding at keeping people in-character.

    Next chapter underway - thanks for the R&R!

Title: Chapter 3 10 Mar 2010 8:48 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Most like is, dear. The timing alone proves that it is highly unlikely that Harry is anyone else's, unless you are suggesting that Lily was a...well, you get the point. Now the real questions is, are you going to try to find out for sure? And if he is, how will you make up for the awful way you have been treating Harry?

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Ah, but our dear Sev is stubborn, is he not?

    Thanks! ^^

     

     

Title: Chapter 3 10 Mar 2010 8:35 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    They need to find each other so harry can get out of that miserable house and they can both have love in their life. Great chapter, please post soon!

    Author's Response: Working on it. ;) Thanks for the R&R!
Title: Chapter 3 10 Mar 2010 6:15 am
Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very interesting and exciting chapter. I like what shapes Harry's boggart took as well as how Snape contemplated Harry's moods and the possibility that he might be his father. I look forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! It took me awhile to figure out just what the boggart would become as Harry had yet to encounter a dementor, yet, so I'm glad it worked.

    Glad you're enjoying the tale so far - thanks for the reviews!

Title: Chapter 3 10 Mar 2010 5:24 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this story, and I can't wait to see what happens when Snape truly accepts the inevitable.

    Will Snape find a way to do a paternity potion. Love how you keep Snape in character by the way.

    Looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you! As for Snape's means of 'verification', shall we say, I do believe it will prove more original than most - but I could be wrong.*shrug*

     

    Ta for the R&R. ^^


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