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Title: Concrete Angel 16 Feb 2016 9:55 am
Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope Dumbledore will learn from his mistakes if even Fawkes shows his displeasure. Wonderful story, thank you!
Title: Concrete Angel 06 Apr 2014 8:54 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it as I loathe Dumbledore!
Title: Concrete Angel 05 Sep 2013 3:13 am
Reviewer: YnxNyx (Signed) [Report This]
    i love that bird.
Title: Concrete Angel 31 Aug 2011 12:54 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    that's true. i'm afraid that not all biblical fathers such as Jacob was a saint.

    good chapter!
Title: Concrete Angel 17 May 2011 4:48 am
Reviewer: Lira (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is excellent in all ways; conspicuously well crafted, original and well thought out. The characters are in character, with the motives for their "selves" laid bare. Really well done! I must also agree with your notes; favoring one child over another, even without neglect, can lead to serious problems. An original and pleasing revenge for Severus!
Title: Concrete Angel 03 Mar 2011 11:13 pm
Reviewer: Blueowl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad Dumbledore didn't try to fight the truth. He seems to be redeemable. Thanks for that :P

    Looking forward to seeing how Harry reacts to becoming a ward of Hogwarts.
Title: Concrete Angel 19 Jul 2010 12:16 pm
Reviewer: jessica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    i once again have to congradulate you on a great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you ^^
Title: Concrete Angel 17 Apr 2010 10:00 pm
Reviewer: Shattered (Signed) [Report This]
    "The Headmaster was not comforted by the bird response: which was to turn his back and contemptuously relieve himself. "

    LMAO... that's the best line EVER!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you liked it :)
Title: Concrete Angel 04 Apr 2010 5:17 am
Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well, sorry, but the story just isn't too my liking. It's a little odd to say the least, although your writing style is magnificent. I also don't like how you seem to bash on Christianity all the time and people only pray to false Gods.

    Author's Response:

    I think it is wisest to remember two things 1. when a character speaks, it is their views, not the authors and 2. that the wizarding community is bound to feel pretty uncomfortable about Christianity in general: the Bible says that people who use magic should be killed and, in the past thousand or so years, Christians have committed atrocity upon atrocity on those who they have thought to be witches. They have burnt them (a horrible, exceptionally painful death) and tortured them (and I'm not talking about a beating, I'm talking about really gruesome, vicious, humiliating abuse.) It would be exceptionally odd that if a culture who has been so denigrated was not rather scornful of the people who have long persecuted them.

    I actually have nothing against Christians: Christianity is no worse than many religions and better than some. I think the ten commandments are a decent set of life rules and I think much of what was said by Jesus was wise and good. However, I will never except those parts of the bible which encourage intolerance and cruelty, i.e. homophobia.

Title: Concrete Angel 23 Mar 2010 11:46 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Lol, Fawkes!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yup, Fawkes definately got the last word ^^

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