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Title: Uroborus 02 Sep 2014 6:17 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    The letters did a good job of putting Harry straight about what his friends think of him. Severus should be able to finish that job. I liked that you included the letters.
Title: Uroborus 10 Apr 2014 11:49 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter thank you
Title: Uroborus 20 Dec 2011 5:55 am
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    I was crying with Harry as he read the letters...still here blinking back tears lol
Title: Uroborus 04 Mar 2011 1:51 am
Reviewer: Blueowl (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome. I liked the letters.
Title: Uroborus 21 Jun 2010 4:14 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    I like the little cottage! Also, I love how you have depicted everyone. This is really an enjoyable tale. ^^

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm really glad that you're enjoying it. Urobrus is one of my favourite inventions; it's such a calm, natural, well-loved house.
Title: Uroborus 11 Jun 2010 5:00 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    It's odd how often school-aged figures in stories get depressed on or around my birthday...
    I'm glad you've mad so many people glad with this story but the frequent updates, but your Order of the Pegasus was what first attracted me to your writting

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Harry becomes depressed at this time because a. he has been taught to loathe himself and b. as he is no longer in fear of punishment, his wounded psyche decides to 'punish' itself.

    As I got more involved with writing 'WBCI', I developed writers-block for OotPegasus and, as the latter has a very complex plot, I decided that it'd be better to wait until I could do a good job then struggle through the block before I'd got everything ordered in my mind. However, I'm in the process of writing a chapter at the moment. I'm really sorry for the delay and I'm glad you enjoyed reading the story 

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Harry becomes depressed at this time because a. he has been taught to loathe himself and b. as he is no longer in fear of punishment, his wounded psyche decides to 'punish' itself.

    As I got more involved with writing 'WBCI', I developed writers-block for OotPegasus and, as the latter has a very complex plot, I decided that it'd be better to wait until I could do a good job then struggle through the block before I'd got everything ordered in my mind. However, I'm in the process of writing a chapter at the moment. I'm really sorry for the delay and I'm glad you enjoyed reading the story 
Title: Uroborus 10 May 2010 12:24 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love this one especiall y the little snakes

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Title: Uroborus 24 Mar 2010 5:33 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Picture of Snape again? I wish i could draw!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, I wish I could just zap certain images from my mind onto the page too ^^
Title: Uroborus 22 Mar 2010 3:10 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    What a wonderful, restful place for Harry! I'm glad that Severus has taken him to this safe house and hope that being in such a peaceful environment will help him begin to heal.

    And the letters from his friends are wonderful too. I hope that Harry will begin to realize that people do care for him and like him.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^. Uroborus was designed to be a holiday home for psycologically damaged children: one which was peaceful, safe and comfortable. Those who were sad and listless, could sit in the bright, airy rooms, listening to the sea and reading one of the house's many books, those who were recovering, could wander around, discovering the house's many secrets or enjoying it's resourses and children who wished to play could enjoy the sun, sand and sea (which is kept completely safe by one of Salazar's other little secrets ;)

    I'm glad you enjoy the letters; they're great fun to write :)  

Title: Uroborus 21 Mar 2010 10:34 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Superb chapter. You describe the Slytherin haven so well that I felt a peace stealing over me as I read it. The letters, as well as Harry's accompanying thoughts were a nice touch. Harry would find it hard to believe that anyone could care for him at this stage. The hug and gift toward the end as well as the revelation of just how much money Professor Dumbledore has given Severus for Harry's care helped to round the chapter out nicely. A very enjoyable read. Thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I really wanted to make 'Uroborus' a reflection of Slytherin's paternal side, much as the Chamber of Secrets is a reflection of the warrior aspect of his character. I also wanted to allow Dumbledore to redeem himself a little not by giving money as such but rather the guilt that influenced the gift.   

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