| Title: Interlude 3: Visit to Elb
| 11 Dec 2016 7:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely chapter and a very well realised magical shopping centre!
I enjoyed the description of Elb. It sounded beautiful but I wondered how anyone would live there full time so I was glad when Severus told Harry that it was like a Muggle shopping center. The shops sounded like they would be fun to visit. It must have been a wonderful day for Harry.
| Title: Interlude 3: Visit to Elb
| 10 Apr 2014 11:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely chapter
| Title: Interlude 3: Visit to Elb
| 19 Jul 2010 9:08 pm
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| Reviewer: jessica (Anonymous)
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good job!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
I love wizarding sweets!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Yes, I had fun inventing those few which were original :)
This was such a lovely addition to your story. I like how Harry picked out treats for everyone except for himself and how Severus, knowing that Harry would do that, made sure he had something of his own. A pleasure to read.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I thought it would be a very 'Harry' thing to do; become so wrapped up in his gift buying, that he'd forget himself. Severus, of course, could guess what Harry was up to ^^
| Title: Interlude 3: Visit to Elb
| 22 Mar 2010 11:22 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
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Aw, what a fun shopping trip! I'm glad that Severus saw that Harry had a good time and got some of the things that he needs.
Harry did a great job picking gifts for everyone!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Harry deserved a nice day out and a chance to have both the things he needs and a few luxuries. I'm glad you think the gifts were appropriate
I'm glad that the shopping trip went well and that Harry is beginning to believe that Severus does like him, even if he is still a bit unsure. It's good that he finally has glasses that help him see clearly. Severus has taken the time to spoil him a bit, which is excellent and will hopefully begin to convince Harry of his sincerity.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks ^^. You're right; Severus' care, shown in his ensuring that Harry has the nessecities of life, will help heal Harry a little. However, Harry's going to need sustained reassurance to recover properly
Awwww! This was cute! Wonderful chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it
Aw, that was a cute chapter:) I love how Harry is during the shopping trip, he acts just how I always thought he should have when first buying things once he entered the magical world. Im glad he is starting to think that Snape really likes him, hopefully he will believe it one day. Though I cant wait for the next chapter, even if it's going to be a doozie. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks ^^. I agree; Harry has been deprived (and told that he deserves to be deprived) for so long that he'd feel undeserving of any purchase, however cheap. (Possibly, as he was using his own money in Diagon Alley, he didn't feel quite so uncomfortable as he would if someone else was buying it.)
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