Wow! When Peter entered the Slytherin common room, I wondered how long it would take for the snakes to discover him. I thought the rat would be eaten but this was so much better. Reggie shrieking "Cobra in the nest" was a wonderful warning. Severus was in for a big surprise when he appeared.
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| 17 May 2011 7:09 am
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| Reviewer: Lira (Anonymous)
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Gorgeous! The best end for Pettigrew I've ever read; your snake culture is fantastic!
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| 22 Jul 2010 3:46 am
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| Reviewer: Peg (Anonymous)
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I really do love this chapter and how the snakes took such glee in defending their snakelets from an evil enemy.
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| 21 Jul 2010 6:54 am
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| Reviewer: jessica (Anonymous)
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A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! stupid peter! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER AND NOW BECAUSE YOU WROTE IT I LOVE YOU!
Author's Response: Thanks ^^. I must admit, this chapter was one of my absolute favourites to write; I'd had it planned for ages but, of course, I had to get all the elements there before I could set events in motion. Peter certainly should have considered that Slytherins might keep snakes!
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| 23 May 2010 2:12 am
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| Reviewer: al (Anonymous)
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what a great ending to peter pettigrew! and very believable. thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks: Peter Pettigrew's death was one of the events that I'd planned from almost the very beginning and I'm really glad it was well recieved. He lived like a rat and died like a rat ;)
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| 15 Apr 2010 11:18 pm
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| Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous)
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Well done snakes. A perfect joint effort.
Author's Response: ^^ glad you enjoyed the chapter
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