I'm glad the snakes were praised for protecting their owners. I've become fond of them myself.
Title: Interlude 8: Ssssspecial Sssservices
| 21 Jul 2010 7:07 am
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Reviewer: jessica (Anonymous)
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great job!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Title: Interlude 8: Ssssspecial Sssservices
| 17 Apr 2010 1:25 pm
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Reviewer: little-sun (Signed)
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Nice!
Author's Response: Thanks ^^
Title: Interlude 8: Ssssspecial Sssservices
| 16 Apr 2010 6:56 pm
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Reviewer: little-sun (Signed)
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Ron is funny - i like him this bad, angry, braty. M
Title: Interlude 8: Ssssspecial Sssservices
| 16 Apr 2010 12:46 am
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Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
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I've loved these past couple chapters again! Especially the image of Isis riding the wave of water as she comes to defend Harry.
Very interesting that you have brought Pettigrew, and presumably Sirius soon, into the story. I can't wait to read more and see what happens!
Author's Response: Thanks: I really wanted to capture that image accurately because it really is Isis's big moment lol! Hope you'll enjoy the next few chapters ^^
Title: Interlude 8: Ssssspecial Sssservices
| 15 Apr 2010 11:27 pm
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Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous)
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Excellent. You captured the feeling of everyone talking at once in the panic just after the attack very well. I just love Reggie, especially when he sssings.
Author's Response: Thank you: that was probably the most difficult part of the chapter so I'm glad it worked out ^^. Reggie's singing is based on the sort of songs children make up whilst they're playing :)
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