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Title: The True Heir 10 May 2010 12:09 am
Reviewer: anon (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very creative with the youkai dagger.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you approve of the dagger; introducing such items is always a bit of a risk so I'm glad it seems to have worked out.
Title: The True Heir 09 May 2010 11:52 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This continues to impress. The parseltongue is just so clever, as are the twists on the canon storyline.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm really pleased that you're enjoying it. Whenever I write Parseltongue I try to ask myself 'would a snake use this word?' and, if the answer is no, I try to think up an equivalent: for example, calling a snake a b*rd would result in confusion, whereas calling them a 'cobra' or an 'egg-eater', would be totally devastating (unless, of course, they happened to be a cobra. An egg-eating snake, on the other hand, would be most upset: they eat birds eggs, which is a totally different thing to eating their own kind)  
Title: The True Heir 09 May 2010 10:15 pm
Reviewer: Valin (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice one! Looking forward to the next chapter!!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ Glad you enjoyed it
Title: The True Heir 09 May 2010 8:42 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Again, do you watch InuYasha? I don't think you ever answered that question. I sort of figured the saying out for a lie. My form may not be a snake, but one of my alts is part dragon. Such sayings feels like it would be common amongst the reptiles. Kudos, again, on a wonderful chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I didn't know the question had been asked lol! (at least in this fic: Harry Potter and the Order of the Pegasus, is quite obviously an Inuyasha crossover) Yes, I do watch Inuyasha and the dagger is based on Tetsusaiga, albiet with different powers. I imagine that little Salazar's father would want to give his son such a gift ^^.
Title: The True Heir 09 May 2010 5:43 am
Reviewer: Stefunny2010 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow, that chapter went by very differently than I had imagined. Not to say that I didnt like it, I thought it was actually a really different way of portraying Harry and Voldemorts/Quirrells' little battle. I think you did a great job, though I am a bit confused at the ending, is Quirrell dead? Anyway, having Quirrell actually innocent in the whole scheme was a really great twist, that is if he was actually innocent? Anyway great job!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks ^^. I wanted to do something rather different than in the canon as Harry, being a. a Slytherin, b. a favourite of Salazar and c. bonded with Hissy, is in a rather different situation than in the canon which, in turn, places Voldemort in a different position. I'm glad you liked the twist; I was inspired by Renfield, a character in Bram Stoker's 'Dracula'; Renfield is tricked into helping Dracula but, when he realises what he is, tries to resist him but without success. The ending was actually meant to be ambiguous but I'm working on another chapter which I should be in a position to release tonight. (p.s. Quirrell was entirely innocent- Hissy would have destroyed him if he tasted a lie.)  

Title: The True Heir 09 May 2010 5:01 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oooh, awesome! Does this mean voldemort is gone? Basilisk venom is one the few things that can kill a horcrux, so would it kill that remaining fraction of Voldemort's soul? Will Quirrell survive?

    I will look forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: As in the canon, Voldemort fled his host before the venom could destroy him, so no luck there, I'm afraid. However, that did give Quirrell a chance to plead his innocence. I'm afraid I can't answer your last question, as that information might be considered a 'spoiler' lol! Thanks for the review.
Title: The True Heir 09 May 2010 4:55 am
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very nice chapter! I can't wait to see Severus reaction to Harry's adventure, hehe... I think Harry is in one very BIG trouble! =O)
    Update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you enjoy it. Just to mystify you further, I can tell you that Harry won't be in as much trouble as he anticipates, but that will be cold comfort.
Title: The True Heir 09 May 2010 3:50 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooooooooooooh! What an INTERESTING chapter!!! If Quirrell himself wasn't evil, I hope Harry can save him! Can't wait to see what's next!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed it ^^
Title: The True Heir 09 May 2010 3:50 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    At least, Harry was able to prevent the theft of the Stone and resisted Voldemort's attempt to sway him with lies. It was quite interesting to see what the Dagger was able to accomplish. It's clear that it was far from ordinary, even by Wizarding standards! I wonder how different things might have turned out if he hadn't had that dagger?
    Will Harry's tears save Quirrell? I feel it would be a wonderful thing if they do, as it appears that Quirrell might not have been as willing as some might think. It would probably lesson the trauma that Harry will suffer from this confrontation as well.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Without the Dagger, which bore the same stones, metal and insignia as Slytherin's locket, the interview with Voldemort would probably have been somewhat similar to that of the canon; despite the provocation, gaining the Philosopher's Stone was Quirrell's first object, so he would have ignored Harry then, on Voldemort's suggestion, forced the child to look into the mirror. Harry, having gained the Stone, would have tried to escape, Quirrell would have pursued him and, Hissy, having heard the commotion, would arrive in the room in time to save Harry. However, the Dagger bought Harry a lot of time and, thereby, allowed him to learn a little about Voldermort, who did his level best to gain Harry as an ally. Moreover, the dagger showed Voldemort that Harry was Slytherin's chosen heir and that, within Hogwarts, Harry has both the basilisk and Slytherin on his side.
Title: The True Heir 09 May 2010 2:58 am
Reviewer: tambrathegreat (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful. I love your well-thought out parseltongue. It really is amazing to read how a snake might think.

    Thanks for the speedy update. I enjoyed the chapter immensely.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I adore snakes and it's really interesting, once you spend time with them, to see how they react to events and interact with people. Far from being cold, slimy and dishonest, they're very straightforward, affectionate and beautiful creatures ^^. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.

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