I should have mentioned this in chapter 58 (I believe) Severus' letter to Harry to explain his absence mentions a child that had been killed. Who was that??
All in all, though, a grand story. There was so much to enjoy and love about it: Harry, Severus, the Malfoys, the kids, the snakes...
Thank you for writing!
| Title: The Slytherin Inquisition
| 06 Oct 2016 12:46 am
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| Reviewer: etherian (Signed)
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I love your portrayal of all the children. I think in the books (yet moreso in the movies) they tended toward being flat and evil.
| Title: Concrete Angel
| 16 Feb 2016 9:55 am
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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I hope Dumbledore will learn from his mistakes if even Fawkes shows his displeasure. Wonderful story, thank you!
| Title: Epilogue
| 22 Dec 2015 2:58 pm
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| Reviewer: PharaohsLoyalMagician (Anonymous)
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This was wonderful. I love how this story is. I love that Uncle Vernon was the nice one for a change (I've never read one where he is and this was a pleasant and fluffy surprise) and I am elated that Severus's father was wonderful. Than I love how Severus gets Harry to heal and that Harry knows he has friends and that the soul piece is gone and Harry can now truly be Harry without fear. I love how there is so many species of familiars. I can only imagine what their compartment must look like. I am so happy Ron is becoming friends with Harry and everyone. I am sad that Hermione's father is dead but I can see why it would be a neccessity. I am also glad that Lucius and Narcissa has left TR. l love the fact that Harry understood that the mistakes Severus made in his past are just that-in the past-and that he was young and coerced and that he knows he's trying to make up for it now. I just hope he can see the same thing when he knows about the prophecy. I really love that Harry can talk to Professor Slytherin and that he has control over Mr. Hissy so he can no longer have the possibility of hurting anyone against his own will. I really love that Severus is a Parselmouth and now can speak to the snakes and Harry if the language of the snakes if he wishes so. I love when authors do that. I think this arc has ended wonderfull and I excitedly await the next. Oh, and I love how Lucius is less strict with the whole Malfoy image at home deal and actually indulges his son (though not without reasonable restrictions such as the black mamba). I know my twin and I shall read your other stories and wait as patient as we can for the next. You're a truly brilliant author and writer. Cheers and ta.
Post script: I love how Dudley has a second chance to be cousins with Harry and meet his friends. I also like how he knows what his other did was very wrong although the method could have been better but it was the fastest and most gentle way. I just hope that maybe when he is older and has matured he may go visit his mother if only for a brief amount of time for each visit, or letters at the very least. I agree what she did was quite horrendous but she really does love her son, even if she should have had more restraint in not indulging him as much.
| Title: Interlude 5: Daddy Wouldn't Buy Me A Cobra
| 21 Dec 2015 2:57 am
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| Reviewer: PharaohsLoyalMagician (Anonymous)
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This is a wonderful chapter. I love the banter between Draco and his father. I also love the incident that happened between the mouse and Harry. I feel sorry for Harry but it is rather amusing in the way you wrote it. This makes me want to own a snake even more now and I know I have to do thorough research before I purchase one (a few years away as my family will never allow me to have one however unfortunate it is but it is for the best what with my two young nephews around.) I love that Salazar talked to Harry and also informed Severus on how Harry feels. I find the moments between Severus and Harry are rather adorable. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. Cheers and ta. You're a wonderful author and writer. I am glad my twin is reading this as well.
| Title: Epilogue
| 04 Dec 2015 5:26 pm
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| Reviewer: holy shit (Anonymous)
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this was excellent - excellent characterization, excellent plotline, excellent expansion on the HP universe. Hot damn.
| Title: Interlude: Letters.
| 07 Apr 2015 1:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Twonky (Signed)
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I like how you used old English in this fic, and correctly too!
I really enjoyed your story. I've read other Slytherin Harry stories before but the traditions and the Head of House as Basilisk were different concepts. I also liked all the snake familiars. You mentioned doing a sequel and I wondered if you did?
Author's Response: Thank you for all of your reviews. Yes, there is a mini-sequel- just click on "Morgana" and you'll be taken to my author's page- all the stories are listed at the bottom of the page.
The death of Hermione's father was an unexpected twist. Her mother was lucky to escape. Thanks for telling who Owen Lawgoch was. I wasn't familiar with the reference.
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