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Reviews For Harry, The Werewolf
It gives you a chance to explore how Harry will react to certain events and characters. Is there conflict between father and son because of Harry's wolf instincts? Are his senses heightened in human form or does it only apply when he's a wolf? Are his reactions more wolf-like? On another note, I find your story lacks detail. Please, don't be afraid to add it! How does a character feel when he walks into a room? What does the room look like? How do the characters react with each other? This is not a flame, and it's not meant to be taken as one. It's just a few pointers, that, I find, help my own writing. The only way to get better is to practice and if you love doing it, that's even better! Grab that bull by the horns and keep writing! Respectfully yours, Lady Julie Snape
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