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Title: Chapter 5: Introduction to Wolfbane 27 Mar 2010 12:45 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm looking forward to the next segment.
Title: Chapter 5: Introduction to Wolfbane 26 Mar 2010 8:53 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yes I love this I can wait to the next chapter see yah soon!
Title: Chapter 5: Introduction to Wolfbane 25 Mar 2010 9:44 pm
Reviewer: Lady Julie Snape (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry being bitten and turned into a werewolf is rare and provides the author with oppurtunities galore.

    It gives you a chance to explore how Harry will react to certain events and characters. Is there conflict between father and son because of Harry's wolf instincts? Are his senses heightened in human form or does it only apply when he's a wolf? Are his reactions more wolf-like?

    On another note, I find your story lacks detail. Please, don't be afraid to add it! How does a character feel when he walks into a room? What does the room look like? How do the characters react with each other?

    This is not a flame, and it's not meant to be taken as one. It's just a few pointers, that, I find, help my own writing. The only way to get better is to practice and if you love doing it, that's even better!

    Grab that bull by the horns and keep writing!

    Respectfully yours,

    Lady Julie Snape
Title: Chapter 5: Introduction to Wolfbane 25 Mar 2010 7:47 pm
Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Brilliant chapter... I love the Harry/snape bonding in the story.. hope you update soon
Title: Chapter 5: Introduction to Wolfbane 25 Mar 2010 3:21 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. I thought that Ron will be git a little longer...never mind.
    Thanks for chapter!

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