| Title: Chapter 08
| 22 Apr 2014 9:08 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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oh I love this poor harry I hope to see more when you can thank you.
Tricky how Severus didn't reveal who the Master Harry would be apprenticed to was until after the signing had been completed. I wonder what the blood mist was all about.
Nice revelations, and realizations on Severus' part as he came to understand that Harry did not have the ideal upbringing that he'd imagined all along. I don't think Petunia was overly out of character, nor was Severus, given the nature of this AU.
Nice revelations, and realizations on Severus' part as he came to understand that Harry did not have the ideal upbringing that he'd imagined all along. I don't think Petunia was overly out of character, nor was Severus, given the nature of this AU.
Nice background on Severus. I like Nan. I wonder how things will go when he picks up Harry...
I like the idea that your version of Severus has a bit of a prankster in him, as well as how Dumbledore manages to manipulate him into taking Harry on as an apprentice.
I really like how you explain things in the opening chapter, and set the stage for the story, giving us necessary background. Very good work.
| Title: Chapter 08
| 03 Feb 2013 5:56 am
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| Reviewer: anne dixon (Anonymous)
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To be continued...
where is the continuing story?
| Title: Chapter 08
| 27 Apr 2011 12:49 pm
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| Reviewer: b.nolea (Anonymous)
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The story plot is interesting, please post more! :)
When will there be more...please :)
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