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Reviews For Apprentice
Title: Chapter 08 18 Apr 2008 9:56 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    this story is great, glad harry is safe now that he's away from the dursleys, hope they get what they deserve a stint in azkaban would be good or just send mouldywarts round to torture them, severus and his nan will be great for harry as he needs love and affection and nan will be there to do that. will we find out how snapes wife and daughter died, keep writing
Title: Chapter 08 11 Apr 2008 4:43 am
Reviewer: Becky (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am loving this story and cannot wait for yout to write some more
Title: Chapter 08 19 Mar 2008 6:58 pm
Reviewer: silverwritingquill (Signed) [Report This]
    It's interesting. Not amazingly so, but...pretty good if English isn't your first language.

    If I may suggest, try making the dialogue relax a bit more. You seem to forget that Harry is fifteen, and trust me, at fifteen, no one talks, or THINKS like that. Snape's thoughts are okay-ish at best, but what he says is perfect. Completely in character.

    Which brings me to another point. I know you said that this was an AU and that the characters would be slightly OOC, but Harry is WAY too much.

    I understand what you're trying to do-make him appear abused and hurt, and whatever, but REALLY, Harry can't just roll over and suddenly like Snape.

    He can in the end, you can't just STOP hating someone for four years and then suddenly like him.

    So, SNAPE, he's fine. HARRY isn't.

    All in all, though, the story is very interesting, and I can't wait to see what you plan to do with it! Keep up the good work!
Title: Chapter 08 12 Feb 2008 3:50 am
Reviewer: Princess Arica of Rivendell (Anonymous) [Report This]
    UPDATE
Title: Chapter 08 10 Jul 2007 3:57 pm
Reviewer: kittycatgirl85 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like Apprentice. There is angst without going overboard and everyone drowning in the angsting. Also it is lovely that Harry can actually reason that Snape is not evil. I can't wait for the next update.
Title: Chapter 08 12 May 2007 3:54 pm
Reviewer: Laira (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice. I tried to review before bu that stupid security code is so small. ANYway, it's a lovely read and I'm enjoying it a lot. The reasons for the apprenticeship were well thought out and I'm looking forward to see what happens next.
Title: Chapter 08 20 Apr 2007 9:25 am
Reviewer: Jackyl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    WOW!! animealam, This is an awesome story so far. I just found it while surfing this site and cannot wait to hear the conversation with the headmaster. That should be fun. I love the character Nan, she adds that motherly touch to everything that fits so well with this.

    Also, Severus driving the SUV...brilliant! I could just picture it in my head and had to laugh out loud.

    Please continue this story and update often. I will keep reading, I promise.
Title: Chapter 08 05 Mar 2007 10:29 pm
Reviewer: Alexis8907 (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a pretty good story so far!
Title: Chapter 08 30 Jan 2007 12:15 am
Reviewer: Kacela (Anonymous) [Report This]
    PLEASE CONTINUE! This is a fantastic series! I love the whole "Snape is a mentor for Harry" thing. You are an amazing writer! PLEASE keep on with this story!!!!!
Title: Chapter 05 26 Dec 2006 11:17 pm
Reviewer: NyxSerpent (Anonymous) [Report This]

    Don't know if you realized it, but you've got the same thing up for this chapter and the chapter before it.  You may want to fix that.

    Story seems good so far, I'll likely end up keeping an eye out for updates. 


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