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Title: New Promises 13 Nov 2013 4:27 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    A family of foul mouthed Jarveys. Wow. It sounds like Severus will need a silencing spell. Still, I supose they would be useful for keeping away guests. Severus seems like someone who would appreciate that aspect.
Title: New Promises 29 Oct 2011 8:30 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    haha Poor Severus
    He'll never get any peace around :D
    Great job!
Title: New Promises 05 May 2010 2:40 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww I love your filthy-mouthed little Demonsthenes: he's rude and crass but very sweet and endearing with it- a difficult feat to achieve. Harry acts very true to character and I like the way that you have evolved Severus.

    Author's Response:

    I think Severus would make a great pet owner (for whatever pet, really). JKR wouldn't agree with me,  I am sure :) Thank you very much for your review! Mila

     

Title: New Promises 04 May 2010 6:53 pm
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    I like your descriptors in this chapter. You're really becoming a great writer!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you very much for your kind words! Mila
Title: New Promises 04 May 2010 2:14 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was so cute! Severus really is getting soft, lol.

    Author's Response: Hee hee, he is, isn´t he :-)
Title: New Promises 01 Apr 2010 6:16 am
Reviewer: celticmoon (Signed) [Report This]
    It took me a little while to be able to type a review, as my eyes were streaming with tears from laughing after the line:“Busty Jarvey?” Demosthenes, who had come back unnoticed, cut Severus off. “Fucking big-ass dam for me?”

    Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!

    Author's Response: Thank you :) Demosthenes is something, isn't he? M.
Title: New Promises 31 Mar 2010 1:54 pm
Reviewer: Lumiere (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely love Demosthenes, he's hilarious! I can't wait to read more :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! He is my fav beast as well. Mila
Title: New Promises 31 Mar 2010 12:33 pm
Reviewer: La Mariane (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love the idea of Severus with several swearing Jarveys in his home. LOL

    Author's Response: Haha, yes me too. Thank you for reviewing. Mila
Title: New Promises 31 Mar 2010 4:46 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    I like it!! I live Jarvey, and how excited he got. I also really liked how Severus slows the gnomes down for him. :0)

    Author's Response: Thank you! Severus loves his familiar, does he not? Heehee. Mila
Title: New Promises 31 Mar 2010 4:09 am
Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Liked it ? Loved it! I laughed out loud at the idea of Severus having a Jarvey! And a "debate" of Jarveys? Like a murder of crows? Very clever! Write more soon.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I will have to research dirty words! I found I don't know enough of them :O And dictionaries are horribly correct and list hardly anything useful. Haha, what a unique problem. Mila

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