|
Reviews For Anaphylaxis
Author's Response: Thank you. I may consider a sequel after I finish my WIP. :)
Poor Harry and Neville...they tried so hard, but it just wasn't meant to be. Harry would have a rare allergy, wouldn't he? It's just typical for him. I loved how Severus quickly realized that something was wrong and was so concerned for him. And I espcially loved the end, that Severus stayed with him until he was awake again. Author's Response: Thank you! Poor guys, they just can't catch a break, even when they do their best. I'm glad you enjoyed it, I had a good time writing it (maybe there's something wrong with me, enjoying torturing Harry like that. lol)
Author's Response: Thank you!
I liked your use of descriptions of the environment and characters. There was just enough to make the scene alive, although I would have liked more descriptions of faces, especially Snape. Well done on this story! Thanks for decided to write a story for my challenge!! :) Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I really enjoyed writing it. :) I'm pretty sure Neville was chosen to clean. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, he's an unlucky guy when it comes to huge odds like that! Poor kid! Thank you!!! |
Powered by eFiction 3.5 |