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Reviews For Anaphylaxis
Title: Anaphylaxis 30 Apr 2010 7:29 am
Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it!
Title: Anaphylaxis 23 Mar 2010 4:24 pm
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor guy! ^^ Well-written. I really like it.
Title: Anaphylaxis 17 Mar 2010 7:46 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story thank you
Title: Anaphylaxis 16 Mar 2010 12:04 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm will you have a sequil to this. This was an interesting story.
Title: Anaphylaxis 16 Mar 2010 12:04 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm will you have a sequil to this. This was an interesting story.

    Author's Response: Thank you. I may consider a sequel after I finish my WIP. :)
Title: Anaphylaxis 14 Mar 2010 5:53 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great one-shot! It's so well-written; you did a wonderful job responding to the challenge.

    Poor Harry and Neville...they tried so hard, but it just wasn't meant to be. Harry would have a rare allergy, wouldn't he? It's just typical for him.

    I loved how Severus quickly realized that something was wrong and was so concerned for him. And I espcially loved the end, that Severus stayed with him until he was awake again.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

     Poor guys, they just can't catch a break, even when they do their best. I'm glad you enjoyed it, I had a good time writing it (maybe there's something wrong with me, enjoying torturing Harry like that. lol)

Title: Anaphylaxis 14 Mar 2010 11:08 am
Reviewer: KKJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful oneshot. The end was rather poetic. Nicely done.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

Title: Anaphylaxis 14 Mar 2010 8:52 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice take on the challenge! :) I was so happy to see that someone responded so quickly. Hooray! I bet that Neville was the one to clean up the Potions classroom. I loved how Snape thought about which Gryffindor would clean it up and when he looked at Harry he thought 'not that one.'

    I liked your use of descriptions of the environment and characters. There was just enough to make the scene alive, although I would have liked more descriptions of faces, especially Snape.

    Well done on this story! Thanks for decided to write a story for my challenge!! :)

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I really enjoyed writing it. :) I'm pretty sure Neville was chosen to clean. :)
Title: Anaphylaxis 14 Mar 2010 7:34 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Of course Harry would have a rare allergy. It's just the way he is with odds. This was a really enjoyable short story, and I loved that Severus stayed with Harry up until the moment his eyes flickered open. It was very in character for him. Great job.

    Author's Response: Yeah, he's an unlucky guy when it comes to huge odds like that! Poor kid! Thank you!!!

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