Thanks for the fun story. It would be lovely to see how the three manage together as a family!
This story is bloody brilliant. I never read an Aurora/Severus fanfic, but this is really cute. Kudos to the author, and her exceptional stories.
I appeciate how you gave Professor Sinstra a more prominent role. Everyone seems to forget her as a charcter since she's not really one of the core subjects of big 4 heads of house. I have heard that she's the other option for Slytherin head of house.. but usually writers paint her as this mousy women who fits the sterotype cannon expectation of a Hufflepuff. That she is too emotional or week minded in some way. I love how you pained her as some bada hidning in the shadows who knows all secrets because of how she is often a forgotten professor. Man you made her viciously scary when she's angry. Would NOT want to mess with her. Its always the calm collected quiet ones that have the loudest roar. They forget we're here and the smart ones like Sinstra, use that to their advantage. Wonderful job.
Author's Response: lol. My other work actually has her sort of Hufflepuffish and definitely different from this one. But thank you.
| Title: Happy Family
| 23 Dec 2015 2:25 pm
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| Reviewer: PharaohsLoyalMagician (Anonymous)
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This was brilliant! As well as splendid and wonderful. I love how Harry and Draco are getting along better and that Ron and Hermione accept him well enough. Than the banter and concern between Sinistra and Severus is always interesting to read. I particularly love the ending. I love how Dumbledore and Sinistra meddle when they both know how it would work out in the end and are simply being a catalyst. I than love how Lockhart was the conduit and I pity TR who had to listen to Lockhart and that Ginny remained innocent. I think this story is brilliant and wonderfull written. I would love to read more of this series (as I know my twin will love to as well) and I think it would be a wonderful full length story (as in it expands until TR's final death). I really loved how Lily showed up and that Severus has moved on. I think you're a most brilliant author and writer. Cheers and ta.
Author's Response: You are too kind. :) Thank you.
This is really cute!
I enjoyed Snape and Sinistra arguing and hexing each other but in a loving way :)
You did an awesome job developing the relationship between Snape and Harry and their trust.
Awesome fic :)
Author's Response: Thank you. :D
| Title: Happy Family
| 27 Feb 2011 6:43 am
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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Loved the story!
Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. :D
*applauds*
A dash of romance, a touch of angst and adventure, all mixed together with a pinch of h/c... Delightful. Well done!
Author's Response: All in all that's my basic formula to a Snape/Sinistra story with Harry. Thanks Glad you enjoyed. :D
*snickers softly* That was a good one. Kudos on a well written story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. :)
This was sweat very good I love that I was able to read the whole story...What next?
Author's Response: Thanks, HeartStar. I'm convinced it wasn't my best story because I rushed the ending and focused a lot on Snape/Sinistra. Well, for me, I'm probably going to start finishing my other stories so I can focus on writing them one at time again. I will probably do a couple of one-shots of SLC with scenes I meant to include but didn't and how the "happy" family is doing. It'll be awhile before I am able to write those one-shots, though. Again, thanks for reading and reviewing. :)
I'm sure that Severus will be at least a little bit understanding about Harry's role in this series of events. It wasn't his fault and he couldn't have stopped it from happening. I think that the only thing that Severus will be upset about is that he didn't tell him more about the voices. Perhaps Severus could have figured it all out sooner if he had.
I'm glad that Severus has finally decided to reach out and take the family that's just waiting for him. I'm sure that he, Aurora, and Harry will make a strong, happy family unit.
Great story!
Author's Response: Thanks, silverstar. I'm sure he'll be very understanding too. Like Aurora says at the end, the happy family is debatable. It certainly will be interesting. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
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