Great story so far. I really liked the use of the memories.
| Title: Putting the Fear of God in Them
| 10 Dec 2022 1:23 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I like this side of Sinistra, assuming she remains on the side of good. She is an oft overlooked character, so it’s nice to see her get a prime role.
I’m glad that Severus open to talking honestly with Harry. Though I wish that he had better protected both boys, knowing that violence was a real possibility.
I wonder how Snape will handle his Slytherins and prevent another attack.
| Title: Interlude of Potions Class
| 10 Dec 2022 2:26 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I love that Snape is trying to get through to Harry. I hope he succeeds soon.
| Title: Settling in for a Long Night
| 10 Dec 2022 2:04 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I’m really enjoying the somewhat saucy and tension-laden dynamic between Sinistra and Snape.
| Title: Slytherin’s Official Welcoming Committee
| 10 Dec 2022 1:58 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I’m intrigued by the first person perspective of your story. Snape’s inner voice seems compassionate towards Harry’s plight.
This story is bloody brilliant. I never read an Aurora/Severus fanfic, but this is really cute. Kudos to the author, and her exceptional stories.
I appeciate how you gave Professor Sinstra a more prominent role. Everyone seems to forget her as a charcter since she's not really one of the core subjects of big 4 heads of house. I have heard that she's the other option for Slytherin head of house.. but usually writers paint her as this mousy women who fits the sterotype cannon expectation of a Hufflepuff. That she is too emotional or week minded in some way. I love how you pained her as some bada hidning in the shadows who knows all secrets because of how she is often a forgotten professor. Man you made her viciously scary when she's angry. Would NOT want to mess with her. Its always the calm collected quiet ones that have the loudest roar. They forget we're here and the smart ones like Sinstra, use that to their advantage. Wonderful job.
Author's Response: lol. My other work actually has her sort of Hufflepuffish and definitely different from this one. But thank you.
| Title: Happy Family
| 23 Dec 2015 2:25 pm
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| Reviewer: PharaohsLoyalMagician (Anonymous)
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This was brilliant! As well as splendid and wonderful. I love how Harry and Draco are getting along better and that Ron and Hermione accept him well enough. Than the banter and concern between Sinistra and Severus is always interesting to read. I particularly love the ending. I love how Dumbledore and Sinistra meddle when they both know how it would work out in the end and are simply being a catalyst. I than love how Lockhart was the conduit and I pity TR who had to listen to Lockhart and that Ginny remained innocent. I think this story is brilliant and wonderfull written. I would love to read more of this series (as I know my twin will love to as well) and I think it would be a wonderful full length story (as in it expands until TR's final death). I really loved how Lily showed up and that Severus has moved on. I think you're a most brilliant author and writer. Cheers and ta.
Author's Response: You are too kind. :) Thank you.
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