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Title: Midnight Swim 04 Apr 2010 7:23 am
Reviewer: amsilcox (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh yes! Sinistra does have great motives. Keep thinking that if Sev hadn't of been in love with Lily then he would have been in love with Sinistra. Looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying it. You're probably going to have to wait awhile for the next chapter unless I get really lucky and can find time to write tomorrow. Thanks again. :)
Title: Midnight Swim 04 Apr 2010 6:38 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    So Harry is really considering staying with Slythering. I think that it will be good for him in the long run. Of course, there will be issues along the way, but in the end it will make it easier for Severus to protect him. At least, Severus now knows that he has a chance and has gotten some idea of what life for Harry at the Dursley's home is really like.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Title: Decisions 03 Apr 2010 9:03 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, to expel them. Right punishment I.guess. Leaves them no choice but follow V. though.

    Author's Response: I couldn't figure out a just punishment for what they did. I mean, my first instinct was give them to Sinistra, but I was afraid then she'd end up in Azkaban. Or the kids would end up in St. Mungo's at the very least. Thanks for the review. :)
Title: Decisions 03 Apr 2010 6:53 am
Reviewer: LilyLove (Anonymous) [Report This]
    No one I've read ever uses Sinistra and you've created in her a character with a presence that compels me to keep reading the story.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you like her. Thanks for the review. :)

Title: Pensieve 03 Apr 2010 12:14 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    What a strange fight. Pansy is really a number...

    Author's Response: I was going to make her a bit more vicious, but decided against it. Thanks for the review. :)
Title: Putting the Fear of God in Them 03 Apr 2010 12:09 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Hm, so only Nott and Crab+goyle want to be DEs in your story? Works for me.

    Author's Response:

    Sadly, I couldn't think of any other Slytherins. Those just jumped out at me. Thanks for the review. :)

Title: Heartfelt Conversations 03 Apr 2010 12:02 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    More of Sinistra indeed! I liked I liked! Mila

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you're liking her. Strangely enough, she keeps popping up now in almost every chapter I'm writing. Thanks. :)

Title: Decisions 02 Apr 2010 9:10 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that is so sweet. I'm glad that Snape gave Harry the chance to go back to Gryffindor, and if Harry decides to stay, then it'll be his own choice, and he won't be so resentful.

    I wish that Snape would take Harry away from the Dursleys though, but I guess this is only a Mentor story, not a "Guardian" story, isn't it? I can't stand the thought that Harry is going to go back there.

    Great chappie. I really like the story told from Snape's POV. You've done a great job with that, and I love getting his thoughts and feelings on Harry and the situation.

    Can't wait for the next chappie.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Pandora. I'm up in the air about making this a guardian story or not. I'm totally with you that Harry needs to be taken away from those vile people. So...maybe it might change categories soon. Or at least I might send Sinistra after them...there's a horrifying thought. ;)
Title: Decisions 02 Apr 2010 12:42 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I hope that Harry will give Severus and Slytherin a chance. Not all Slytherins are cut from the same cloth and it might be good for him to see things from their perspective. Who knows, maybe he might even make friends with some of them if he gives them a chance.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Maybe. :D Thanks for the review.

Title: Decisions 02 Apr 2010 7:51 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Beautifully written. I liked how you chose to reveal just a portion of the possible abuse Harry has suffered over the years as Severus read his file and stopped reading after a certain point. Sinistra's interference was nice as well and allowed Harry to break the silence with commentary on her, which was safer ground than everything else which hung between them. I am looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)

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