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Reviews For Grandpa Severus
Title: Meeting Snape part Two 02 Apr 2010 4:14 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    You updated! Yay!

    I can see that Lily is already getting to Snape, though he won't admit it. Haha, I'm glad. Also glad they get to keep the dog.

    I thought it was funny when he told them they'd be lucky if he used soap. Haha, that was great.

    Good work! I love your story! :D

    Author's Response:

    Thanks! I'll try and update soon, but with work and life going on it's hard to find the time. Again thanks for your review.

     

Title: Meeting Snape part Two 02 Apr 2010 1:06 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehehe...Lily's got his number all right. She'll have him wrapped around her little finger in no time. I can't wait to see that happen.

    I'm curious how long it will take before Snape gets Lily to talk and how he'll do it.

    Wonderful chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!!! I'll try and update soon!
Title: Meeting Snape part One 01 Apr 2010 4:12 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Great beginning, but what happens to Harry? Isn't Snape going to take his own son in? Isn't he obligated, since Harry is a baby now?

    I can't wait to see where you go with the story.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review. As to what happens to Harry...i'm thinking he'll stay with Molly and Arthur for now. I want to try and keep Sev in character for as long as possible and i think that'd be hard to do if not impossible if Snape was caring for a baby as well as his three grandchildren. All of which have issues of their own that they need to sort out. But eventually i may have Sev take care of him just not yet. Again thank you for the review.

    Nightshade.

Title: Meeting Snape part One 31 Mar 2010 1:43 pm
Reviewer: Lumiere (Signed) [Report This]
    I really like it, I can't wait to read more :)

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Meeting Snape part One 31 Mar 2010 8:41 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I bet Kingsley and the Weasley's are going to try and find some way around the wall. Everyone is going to feel uneasy about the kids staying with Snape, the drunk. I sure do hope he tries to be nice. Since he had the crush on Lily all those years ago, something tells me he'll be a softie when it comes to her. By the way, I love how you have characterized her as mute. It makes her seem so defenseless against everything and I don't think Snape will enjoy tormenting her because of it.

    Great chapter; I hope to read more soon!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks again. I was hoping to make Lily seem defenseless, it'll make it easier to make Severus turn into an old softie.Lol!

    Nightshade

Title: The Day Everything Changed 31 Mar 2010 8:26 am
Reviewer: Ponytail Goddess (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG, you're writing it! Yay! You have no idea how much better my night got when I saw this up!

    Anyway, so far it has been lovely. Is Severus going to be hung over when the kids arrive? That certainly wouldn't make a good first impression. Then again, maybe his drinking is why Harry didn't want the kids to know him. I wonder how he'll react to the dog also, lol. I love the dog's name too, btw, and cannot help but wonder if it reflects his personality. I guess I'll have to find out.

    I'm off to the next chapter! Thanks again for writing this!

    -P.G.

    Author's Response:

    HI! And thank you for coming up with the idea. I saw this a couple of times and hoped someone would write something but no one did. So i did. LOL! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

    Thanks, Nightshade

Title: Meeting Snape part One 31 Mar 2010 7:43 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, I had kinda suspected that was why Lily didn't talk. She's my favorite, I think. Poor little girl...

    Keep up the good work! I am very excited about this story!

    Author's Response: Thank you! Lily's my favorite too. Anyway i'll try not to let you down and make this story good.
Title: Meeting Snape part One 31 Mar 2010 7:13 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    I kinda like mean Snape. Though I'm eagerly anticipating him warming up to his grandkids.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    I do too, I want to 'try' to keep Snape in character for as long as possible. But i also can't wait for him to start being nicer. We'll see which side of me wins. Lol!

    Thank you for reviewing. Nightshade

Title: The Day Everything Changed 30 Mar 2010 11:13 pm
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    wow just wow I would like to see where you take this.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: The Day Everything Changed 30 Mar 2010 6:33 pm
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    British people don't call each other 'guys'.

    Author's Response:

    Oh sorry! I didn't really even think about whether or not to use the word 'guys'. I'm sorry if this sounds like a stupid question but is there a word you'd recomend i use instead? Anyway sorry again, i'll make sure not to do that again.

    Thanks, Nightshade


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