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Reviews For Grandpa Severus
I can see that Lily is already getting to Snape, though he won't admit it. Haha, I'm glad. Also glad they get to keep the dog. I thought it was funny when he told them they'd be lucky if he used soap. Haha, that was great. Good work! I love your story! :D Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try and update soon, but with work and life going on it's hard to find the time. Again thanks for your review.
I'm curious how long it will take before Snape gets Lily to talk and how he'll do it. Wonderful chapter! Author's Response: Thank you very much!!! I'll try and update soon!
I can't wait to see where you go with the story. Author's Response: Thanks for the review. As to what happens to Harry...i'm thinking he'll stay with Molly and Arthur for now. I want to try and keep Sev in character for as long as possible and i think that'd be hard to do if not impossible if Snape was caring for a baby as well as his three grandchildren. All of which have issues of their own that they need to sort out. But eventually i may have Sev take care of him just not yet. Again thank you for the review. Nightshade.
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Great chapter; I hope to read more soon! -P.G. Author's Response: Thanks again. I was hoping to make Lily seem defenseless, it'll make it easier to make Severus turn into an old softie.Lol! Nightshade
Anyway, so far it has been lovely. Is Severus going to be hung over when the kids arrive? That certainly wouldn't make a good first impression. Then again, maybe his drinking is why Harry didn't want the kids to know him. I wonder how he'll react to the dog also, lol. I love the dog's name too, btw, and cannot help but wonder if it reflects his personality. I guess I'll have to find out. I'm off to the next chapter! Thanks again for writing this! -P.G. Author's Response: HI! And thank you for coming up with the idea. I saw this a couple of times and hoped someone would write something but no one did. So i did. LOL! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Thanks, Nightshade
Keep up the good work! I am very excited about this story! Author's Response: Thank you! Lily's my favorite too. Anyway i'll try not to let you down and make this story good.
Great chapter! Author's Response: I do too, I want to 'try' to keep Snape in character for as long as possible. But i also can't wait for him to start being nicer. We'll see which side of me wins. Lol! Thank you for reviewing. Nightshade
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Author's Response: Oh sorry! I didn't really even think about whether or not to use the word 'guys'. I'm sorry if this sounds like a stupid question but is there a word you'd recomend i use instead? Anyway sorry again, i'll make sure not to do that again. Thanks, Nightshade |
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