Hmm, are you even planning on continuing it!? Its not bad, for a moment I thought that this was a dead!Severus fic, thank god its not, but it leaves a lot of things that needed to be unveiled, can you please update it? It has high potential....
Please come back to this story!
This one has great potential!!!
Wow! This is intense! I love all the little hints that you've dropped into this chapter. I do hope that you will continue this story, for I think it's going to be awesome.
Well done!
WOW!
Now this is a story I really want to see continued! Intriguing beginning and I really want to know what happened to Severus! What is Culverhay? Hopefully not a cemetery!
I've really enjoyed reading your posted works and I think you're a darned good storyteller. I've marked you as a favorite author, and look forward to more from your pen.
Well done!
i like this chapter. i think that this story has great potential and i look forward to reading more :D
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