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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: The First Step Toward Change 28 Feb 2011 12:31 am
Reviewer: angeleye68 (Signed) [Report This]
    So the split begins, all of the former "Golden Trio" no longer together. I wish I could get a better feel on your Severus, but it is still early. For a short chapter, it really packed a wallop. In a good way.

    Author's Response: Yes, Harry's going to have to make new friends :D Though he will meet Ron & Hermione in classes, so we'll have to wait and see how he reacts to them. There will be much more Severus later ^^ Thanks for reviewing ^_^
Title: The First Step Toward Change 22 Apr 2010 12:41 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Hotting up towards the action thank you

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Things are going to be getting exciting soon :)
Title: The First Step Toward Change 18 Apr 2010 12:06 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwww, cute scene at the end, the student following Snape. What a predicament the school is in!!! Great story so far! Great chapter! Thanks for the update!

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :)
Title: The First Step Toward Change 17 Apr 2010 6:37 pm
Reviewer: bookslug (Signed) [Report This]
    :) M-R, does that just happen to have Malfoy and Harry in it? Along with Snape!
    :D
    But, of course, that isn't a bad thing.
    This is so good and orginal.
    I can't wait to read more :D

    Author's Response: Haha yes, very convenient! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Title: The First Step Toward Change 17 Apr 2010 12:56 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's good that Harry and Draco just happen to end up with Severus. I have to wonder if that was accident or design on the part of Dumbledore. Sorting children in the way that it was done in the past only caused separation between the students. It would be far better to sort by age and gender than by personality. They could then use clubs and extracurricular activities as ways to blend age groups. Just a thought...

    Author's Response: Yes, very convenient, isn't it? Thanks for your suggestion about the extracurriculars, I think that'll come up later in the story. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Title: The First Step Toward Change 17 Apr 2010 5:59 am
Reviewer: darkorangecat (Signed) [Report This]
    Alphabetical arrangement sounds like a marvelous idea. I liked how you described Professor Sprout and how you have written Professor Snape as a take charge, though reluctantly, professor. I look forward to more of this highly entertaining story.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I think alphabetical arrangement works for the situation. Glad you like it! :)
Title: The First Step Toward Change 17 Apr 2010 4:58 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter--so many questions to ask. . . can't even organized them enough to put them down here. Snape, Draco and Harry. . . how is this all going to work?

    Looking forward to "what's next?"

    V.

    Author's Response: A lot is going to be happening soon! Thanks for reviewing!

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