I like that Molly was the one to bring up the idea that Harry might not be treated properly at home and that Madame Pomphrey investigates immediately. Harry's angry reaction is very believable as it would be difficult to understand how they could not have known and how, now that he knows they know, that nothing seems to be changing. Great start.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing. I though that Molly should know something and as she states that Harry is almost a part of her family she should try to help him. I hope you like the next chapter. : )