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Reviews For Temporal Guardian
Title: Chapter 3 13 Feb 2011 3:59 am
Reviewer: elizzza (Signed) [Report This]
    You have a good story here. However, be a bit more careful with spelling and grammar. Words like 'meanwhile' and 'without' should writen as one word, not two. Hope that is helpful

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