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Reviews For Temporal Guardian
Title: Chapter 9 30 Jun 2010 9:16 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Just a note: You keep writing "c'mon on", which doesn't make any sense. We either say "come on" or "c'mon". The latter is slang for the first and they mean the same thing. c'mon is a combination of "come" and "on" so if you say "c'mon on" it's like saying "come on on".

    Author's Response: Sorry, I will fix them. Thanks you for your review. LL

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