Good chapter. Just a note: You keep writing "c'mon on", which doesn't make any sense. We either say "come on" or "c'mon". The latter is slang for the first and they mean the same thing. c'mon is a combination of "come" and "on" so if you say "c'mon on" it's like saying "come on on".
Author's Response: Sorry, I will fix them. Thanks you for your review. LL
| Title: Chapter 10
| 14 Jun 2010 12:23 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter I loved how Severus handled Harry
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reading my story. LL
Nice chapter. I am not offended by spankings. I used the same punishment for my twins. Severus is right, you only us it to get their attention, anything else is abuse. I am enjoying how their relationship is developing. Poor Harry, coming from an abusive family he just doesn't know what to think!!! I await your next update.
Author's Response: Harry comes from an abusive environment so he has to learn was is normal. Severus is also starting to learn about the boy. Thanks a lot for reading. LL
| Title: Chapter 7
| 05 May 2010 10:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely idea about the bike I wish someone would do a picture!
Author's Response: I think it was nice to give Harry a bike. Because I am sure tht even if his cousin had one he would be allowed to use it. Thanks a lot for reading. LL
Awww... I love the interaction. Snape is doing SO well with Harry!
Author's Response: They are both learning. Thanks for reviewing. LL
excellent chapter please update soon thanks
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. I hope you like the way the story is going. :) LL
great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. LL
great so far plaes update soon. thanks
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. :) LL
| Title: Chapter 6
| 30 Apr 2010 2:25 am
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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Poor Harry can't win for loosing. He ment well.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. LL
| Title: Chapter 5
| 26 Apr 2010 12:41 am
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Glad they didn't jump at the offer but had some reservations great chapter.
Author's Response: They are just learning one about the other. Thanks a lot for reading. LL
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