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Title: The Sorting 02 Jan 2015 6:43 am
Reviewer: EmmalynnLilliannaSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow. I really like your concept with this story, as well as the way you're telling it. I hope the plot-bunnies get enough to eat, because I'd really like to see this story continued.
Title: The Sorting 22 Feb 2011 2:33 am
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh! Let the feud begin! Great to see a new chapter to this wonderful story. Hope to read more soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ Yup, things are going to get pretty fiery lol!
Title: Shopping With Dad 08 Jan 2011 4:41 am
Reviewer: Rosa Mundi (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a lovely story so far. I hope your muse starts talking to you again soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^. I've got the next chapter worked out, all I need is time to write it!
Title: Through the Looking Glass 21 Jul 2010 3:11 pm
Reviewer: Peg (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this twist on the original story. It will be interesting to see how being brought up in a stable, loving, and magical household will affect future events for both Harry and Dudley. Good job!

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm glad you like it. I think this change will rather substantially alter future events but I can't say more without giving away too much!
Title: Through the Looking Glass 15 Jul 2010 4:21 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so enjoying this story. It is a totally different twist to everything. Was James arrested or is he going to be coming back to make the Snape's life awful? Look forward to the next update.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^. James Snape is, in fact, doing exactly what Voldemort told him to do; he has taken a position at Hogwarts and is ingratiating himself with Dumbledore. The fun thing about this plot is that we'll have Harry/Snape interaction at school and Harry/Severus interaction at home; it's just that his teacher is James Snape and his father is Severus Potter lol!
Title: Change of Heart 06 Jul 2010 12:09 am
Reviewer: frodolove12 (Signed) [Report This]
    I've been meaning to read this for a while. It seems like such an interesting story! Good first chapter :D
Title: Aftermath 13 Jun 2010 8:12 pm
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story, I hope you comtinue it.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^. I've just uploaded a chapter, which I hope you'll enjoy.
Title: The Prophecy 13 Jun 2010 7:51 pm
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm loving this story, I can't wait to see what all you can do with it.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you continue to enjoy it
Title: Aftermath 13 Jun 2010 11:14 am
Reviewer: Hedwig's Owl (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Really cool fic. I love how you've switched everything round.

    Author's Response: Thank you. I thought it'd be really interesting to develop the character's personalities from the very beginning. I've tried to keep true traits constant whilst evolving 'learnt' behaviour, thus Severus is still rather arrogant and hot-tempered, but, having lived with a loving family, he is much more secure and, thus, has remained more like the eleven year old Severus we see in DH. I've just done the same for Dudley in this last chapter so I hope people think it works out.
Title: Aftermath 27 May 2010 8:05 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Ihinking more about Dudley being raised by Lily made me realize that all things aren't black and white.

    Lily and Petunia were sisters until magic separated them. Part of this was Petunia's fault. But if something came between me and my sister which meant I wouldn't see her for 9 months out of the year and would make it so that I would not have a strong part in her life, I would hate it too. Yes, she was jealous but I think, also, saddened. If we look at the pictures of Petunia and Lily, then it looks like Lily was the pretty one and Petunia the responsible one. Parents do not treat their children alike and I am betting anything that Lily was the favoured one.

    Then, Harry is dropped off like a litter of unwanted kittens - in November, at a longitude (I think) of New York city with just a note.

    That note told Petunia that her baby sister had been murdered by an evil wizard whose followers were still after Harry and Harry, whom the evil followers are after is going to live with her and her child.

    She must have been terrified. Murdered sister, evils guys coming, her child being exposed to the very thing that separated and then murdered her sister.

    Petunia said that when Lily came home from school she was all full of the tricks that were taught to them. She must have feared that Harry would play tricks on Dudley and Dudley could not protect himself.

    I am not excusing the Dursleys, but I am saying that Lily and Severus will have an easier time raising and caring for Dudley since they don't have all of the baggage that Petunia did. No evil wizards are after him, he can't influence or accidently harm her son, they know and love magic.

    If Dudley has a better life than Harry did, then I think it comes down to more than "lily is good and Petunia is bad."

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Of course, nothing is ever black and white; it is possible to highly sympathise with Petunia for all the reasons you've mentioned and, moreover, Petunia did not have a high-minded, intelligent, empathetic husband (like Severus), she had Vernon- a narrow-minded, petty bully. While a man like Severus would appeal to his Lily's better nature to sooth away irritations, a man like Vernon would support and encourage Petunia's every vexation and unkindly thought: in short, Vernon would coax Petunia out of feeling any guilt for petty or unkind actions.

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