I love this chapter. I liked how Severus was so great with Harry even after he thought Harry had said no.
Author's Response: Severus is a good guy in my mind. Just had a horrible life before. Thanks.
That would be really annoying if when you're trying to apologize someone else blurts out something else you've done wrong. I loved your scene with Severus where Harry finally apologizes and Snape was so understanding, it was perfect.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Well it's nice that Harry wants Draco to go on an adventure with him but isn't it a bit weird that Harry all of a sudden does? Maybe if It showed a bit more of what Harry was thinking.
Author's Response: I explain why he wants to go after the sword in later chapters. Thank you, though.
This chapter was fun to read :) Harry did write about Severus' personal life though so he does kind of deserve whatever happens.
Author's Response: Thanks.
Okay, that wasn't all bad but I still dont like that sinistra also has the connection and that she's dating snape and that Harry thinks of her like a mother.
Author's Response: I'm sorry that you don't like her. She's usually a main character in my stories. Thanks for reading.
Oh I hate that part- that they can hear him. Why?! But the chapter was really funny.
Author's Response: Just a way for Snape to know Harry's safe.
If they're dating then why are they so harsh to eachother? It doesn't seem like they're teasing because they keep glaring at eachother.
Author's Response: They're not really harsh with each other. Their back and forth is banter. Snape says something harsh. She responds in kind. It's a sort of game they play to see who will back down first. Thanks.
Are snape and sinistra a couple? Or good friends? Or is she just there for Harry? I don't know why but I really like it more when there aren't girls involved. At least not at first. But it's really sweet that snapes there and that harry is warming up to him
Author's Response: She's there for Harry. She and Severus are together, though.
This chapter was great, I wonder how dracos going to try to make this up to Harry and how snape will act now.
Author's Response: :D
I knew Ive read this before. But I didn't write it down and I didn't have an account to favorite it. I've been looking for this scene forever
Author's Response: Thanks.
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