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Title: Last Week of Classes 08 Aug 2010 1:41 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Boys will be boys...which means that they will do idiotic things. All in all they got off lightly. I really would have expected Severus to be a bit...meaner (speaking loudly and banging things comes to mind..xD). I do hope that Draco will think before attacking Harry next time. He could have seriously hurt Harry and it wasn't well done of him to do so when Harry was incapable of fighting back.

    Sounds like the Snape boys are having fun catering to a pregnant Aurora. Her emotions are going to be all over the place for a while, so they had best resign themselves to it. Also Severus' advice to just ignore it isn't good at all and has the potential of backfiring spectacularly.

    Author's Response:

    I would say that Snape's a bit understanding because he's dealing with Aurora, who's not a very happy camper right now. He'll probably do that if they ever do it again.

    In terms of his advice, I'd say he was talking about them wanting to laugh, not Aurora's strange behavior. These two do seem a bit immature at times. Thanks. :D

Title: Last Week of Classes 08 Aug 2010 12:12 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool chapter, its good to know that the story will have a sequel :D

    Author's Response: :D Thanks.
Title: Last Week of Classes 07 Aug 2010 9:20 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That is why it is so fun to write about pregnant women, the hormones and mood swings. Can't wait to see when the pain of labor hits. Great chapter. I love Draco and Harry as brothers.

    Author's Response: Labor pains will be in the sequel, and should be a bit...hilarious for us, not for poor Severus, though. Thanks. I love writing them as brothers in this story. :D
Title: We Have to Talk 06 Aug 2010 9:25 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really glad that Aurora forgot to take her potions. If she hadn't, I have a feeling that both she and her baby would have died. I hope that Severus will be more vigilant in the future before giving out potions. I don't doubt his expertise, of course, but he is human and will make mistakes...

    Author's Response: You're most likely right about if she hadn't forgotten. Thanks for the review. :D
Title: Fault Rests with Me 06 Aug 2010 9:22 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I do hope that Aurora will be alright! What exactly does the potion that she is taking do? Is there something else going on that is causing her to react that way to it? I can't help but wonder if she might be pregnant... I guess I will find out soon enough.

    Author's Response: Good guess. :D Thanks for the review.
Title: One Thing a Person Can Always Count On 06 Aug 2010 9:18 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    -snickers- I really loved the last line.

    It's going to be tough for all of them for a while. At least, they now know of the connection between Harry and Voldemort and can work to neutralize it in some way. I do hope that they can get Harry to believe that it really isn't his fault that this happened.

    Harry's reaction to being told to crawl into his parent's bed was amusing and a little sad. I know that part of his problem was that he has never known what it is like to have real parents (he was too young to remember the Potters). I hope that someday he will be more comfortable with the notion that he can go to his parents for comfort and even sleep with them if he needs it....

    Author's Response:

    The last line just felt like it needed to be there. I'm glad you liked it.

    They will deal with the connection, but right now Voldemort's sort of recouperating. :D

    When I wrote that scene, I was wondering if it'd be awkward for him to do that since he is fourteen, but I think that it shows exactly what you said, though. Thanks. :D

Title: Fallen From Grace 06 Aug 2010 9:10 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I understand Draco's feelings toward his 'parents' perfectly. In part, he knows that he is now free to be who he wants to be without having to worry what will be done to him if THEY find out. I can't blame him for being relieved that they are gone for good and can never hurt him again.

    Aurora is an incredibly brave woman. Voldemort doesn't stand a chance against her, though he doesn't seem to realize it. She will do anything to protect her child and there is nothing more dangerous than a protective mother...

    What an awful dream! The really sad thing is that it was a memory and merely a nightmare.

    Author's Response: I agree with it being awful, but Harry has Severus now, and is far from those evil Dursleys. Thanks. :D
Title: We Have to Talk 05 Aug 2010 4:44 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    lol Oh wow, you were right, I havent heard that one before! totally plausable in the wizarding world though I thinks :P loved it

    Author's Response: Thanks. :D
Title: We Have to Talk 05 Aug 2010 12:28 pm
Reviewer: LucySnapeDaughter-Of-Snape (Signed) [Report This]
    Its really good please update soon

    Author's Response: Thanks. :D
Title: We Have to Talk 05 Aug 2010 8:16 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Aaahhh....thats so cute!

    Oddly enough for a brief moment when Aurora was holding her stomache last chapter I thought she could be pregnant, but quickly dismissed the thought.

    I hope its girl. I can just see Severus, Harry, and Draco falling heads over heels for a little girl. She'll be spoiled rotten. (I can also imagine Aurora rolling her eyes in the background).

    Great chapter! Please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    I always write their first child as a girl so that's a definite. I don't know about the spoiled part, though. Thanks for the review. :D


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