AWESOME CHAPTER!
Really, I like your story so far, and can't wait for the next update :)
good one
This story is worth the wait. I really like it. I know how hard it is to write chapters to stories, I have several stories on fanfiction.net. Keep up the good work and please update ASAP. :)
Good story... waiting to know whats next... post faster...:) :)
Title: Tutoring
| 17 Mar 2011 8:09 am
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Reviewer: GriffinRaven (Anonymous)
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Personally I don't think the students should be sorted at least until either 4th-5th years. Instead allow the younger students to freely associate with each other regardless of houses. So that the students are instead sorted by year, and there definitely should be a "wizard studies" complusory class for all muggleborn & muggle-raised students.
I love this! I read the entire thing this evening, and I am enjoying all of the character development you have going on! I love the idea you used to get Harry into Slytherin. I also like how you've worked in a few important events from POA into this, such as the Marauders map!
I'm loving this story. I like how you're giving the Slytherins proper characters, while not forgetting Harry's friends and it should be interesting to see what Harry makes of the various learning opportunities being presented to him. The only trouble is I want more of the story already, but I suppose I shouldn't be greedy!
Hey, that was fun! Look forward to more :)
Great to see the next chapter on this. Nice touch that Harry is starting to realise it isn't all Snape's fault, and that he could have been paying more attention as well. Sounds like he might discover Potions is fun when you put some work into it, though that probably won't go down well with Ron. And throwing the Maurauders' Map into the mix ... *shakes head* evil, pure evil. :)
Glad to see you're pushing on with this - it's far too good to let lie. Looking forward to Harry's next tutoring session with Snape, though it's obviously going to take a long time for him to open up and at the moment Snape doesn't seem to be looking that closely. I wonder if it's going to require some kind of clue for him to get involved.
Awesome story. I can't wait for your next update.
Phew, that was close. The twins are going to get Harry in trouble eventually, aren't they?
Good chappie. Don't worry about the long wait. I know how RL can put a wrench in your best intentions.
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